Reviews for should I?
Caith chapter 1 . 10/21/2002
*sinff* that was so sweet! I loved it!
Professor Authordude chapter 1 . 3/21/2002
Poor Trunks and Vegeta! I liked lots. And your grammar was fine.
Yami-chan and Unrealistic chapter 1 . 10/11/2001
*Crying* Beautiful! Wonderful!
jneisha chapter 1 . 10/6/2001
That was beautiful... finally Vegeta admits that he loves his son... *sobs*
Bandit2 chapter 1 . 9/23/2001
pretty good poem! I think it's really cool that you can write about the same topic several times but still make it a totally different poem. That must make it alot easier to come up with ideas for your poems. Keep on writing, I wanna see more! :)

~Bandit
Zfighter chapter 1 . 9/23/2001
Very good, Very *sob* sad.
chibigirl88 chapter 1 . 9/21/2001
aww...that was sweet! very nice poem! _
Princess Tyler Briefs chapter 1 . 9/21/2001
*sniff* That was so *sniff* so *sniff* BEAUTIFUL *cries*! Poor Veggie-chan! You're ssssoooooo good at these!
OujiBejisama chapter 1 . 9/20/2001
*sniff sniff* beautiful
AnimeMustang chapter 1 . 9/20/2001
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww *snif* That was really good!
Mrs. Trunks chapter 1 . 9/20/2001
Oh god, That was beautiful. You're going on my favorites list.
SMDSP chapter 1 . 9/20/2001
As always, your poems are above par. I love them. Keep up the good work.
shalini chapter 1 . 9/20/2001
This is a very touchy poem...

I like it a lot...