DO NOT WRITE A ITASASU FANFIC OR I WILL KILL YOU

lol what the actual fuck?
"We have a blonde haired, blue eyed, fuckable little uke... Cute"
and Naruto's like
"blush"
ok what the actual fuck I'd be fucking flipping them off, punching their nose back to their skulls and leave them in a hospital, I know Naruto is strong so I think he can do that ur just OOCING him

If you realized this was bad in 2010 at 15, do not read it again! xD This story is ridiculous, I could read few first chapters with a straight face, the rest was either absurd or simply weird. But there are tons of fics like this from before 2010, so no surprise. I don't remember what were my writing skills at 13 (I can only be sure it didn't touch themes like rapes, mpregs and prostitution xP). I'm notwriting it to make you upset, I'm sure now you can see yourself what's wrong with this story. :)

For me personally the most ridiculous was Pein and Itachi's offer: "Hey, Sasuke, Naruto, wanna become whores?". I can hardly believe Itachi thought it was okay to ask such thing seriously, especially of his brother! And there's this thing about Naruto needing cash out of the blue (no info about it ealier) and forgetting about the problem right after fail with Neji (did Naruto ask Sasuke for the money or not?)

If all of them knew about Sai's rape attempt, someone should have done smthng, like report it to police maybe?

Gosh ... I almost fall for Naru's joke. *facepalms* Okay .. I think there's something about the spelling still off here. This would be a nice story if the chapter are longer and there are not always dialog. Also you need to clear it with non-dialog text if someone is lying. It makes things clear and readers understood your story. Haha, hope there will be a sequel for this one though. Okay, keep writing! Ganbatte! :)

I loves it great story!

I don't like m preg so I'm glad he wasn't pregnant ahaha
But yeah read this all today ,I really liked it
At first there was a few spelling errors
But I do them all the time so I can't really complain ahaha
But yeah I liked this a lot!thanks for sharing

Eheh sasunaru!whooooohoooo
P.s hot lemon ahaha

WAIT WAIT WAIT!

let me get this straight...

You were thirteen and writing Lemons?

I do not want to know what you read or watched...ever.

O-O

Bridal style. He carried him bridal style.

The grammar so far has been really horrendous.

Hahahaha! You reap what you sow.

Sai can go mess with his friend hand, who lathers on lotion often, very often.

Love it,awesome

Yay its 2013 and chu r oldy jk or am I *devious look*

Yay no kid u fucking scared me *cries* u really stink u Meany

Lawl! Sluts muahahhahahahaha