The timeline makes no sense. It's September but it's a holiday and they aren't in Hogwarts but Hermione is just turning 17 and Ginny isn't in school either. Molly and Arthur are obtuse dimwits without social skills. Dialogue also isn't great. Also, the law forcing muggleborns to marry by 17 would have them married before 7th year even started.

Great Fanfic! Couldn't stop reading it and finished it in an hour! Amazing!

This was horrible.

It took me 3 hours just to read this chapter because I couldn't stop laughing so hard

Cute

This story was ok. Yes I'm sorry just ok it had quite a full things that just I just really really did not like such as Fred's and Hermione's fight( which personally think that it was if not al Fred's fault then at lest 80% or 85%) Then again there were lIke the frist chapter that was was just so FUNNY and the second one was quite sweet. I don't think I'll read this story again in fact I know I won't sorry but once was more then enugh for me. I am happy that I read it so please don't think that I'm saying this story is DUMB and STUPID because it's NOT it is just a silly that I was happy to read just once. I sorry if my review was rude but that just the way I feel and wen I so reviews I do them tell the wight er how I think and sadly they all not all ways 100% nice. I am sorty if this is not one of them.

That was a super fun fic! I couldn't stop reading it! Amazing job!
XOXO
/Ever/

Oooo Fred and hermione sitting in a tree...

Awesome story

BWAHAHAHAHA! Adorable. Totally adorable.

Epilogue! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Ramyaa :)

I love it.

This is the best start to a marriage law fanfiction Ive read in a while. Freds reaction was perfect. :-]

wotcher,

im going to say first up that i really liked it! ive come back to re-read and review, i remember reading this a while back :)

im going through the story to list the things i do like, and bits i dont or were confused on. i dont like to give just 'it was good' on long fics. so...

LOL Arthur, asking all the people at the table, even with their partners with them :')

i was a little unsure why there wasnt a little outrage on Freds part, i mean he was just told to marry someone. but ok :)

thats sad about her parents :/ i would of liked Fred to like, find her crying and comforted her or something.

i would of liked to have a wedding. :( like later on Fred surprises her with a real wedding now that they were in love.

thats rather sudden...the house. i would of like a description so we knew where they were and what it looked like.

thats cute the whole learning about each others traits ! and his eyes :D

i would of thought the would of discussed the question and made sure they both were ok with not doing it.

There first kiss! would of liked a bit more emotion or sparks from them but oh well.

i like the ring!

AHAHA I LOVED THE BURGALAR SCENE! "What if this guy had already gotten Hermione? What if he had killed her? What if he had eaten that pie his mom made?" LOL ! i liked how he full attacked her and appologised, but didnt really heal her...i wouldve liked him to have to bandage her arm or wipe the blood away etc :)

its cute how they sleep in the same bed and are all awkward and mistake, they were on his bed, so he would look over and see HER stuff.

most awkward excuse ever. a bug? in her hair... trying to bite her finger. uh-huh.

girl time! ;) at a bar? but ok.

i like the potion!

cute chapter!(chap 7) glad theyre on good terms again :) why was she crying...? LOL

cute kiss but i wish she could hold her achohol better. its just a really adorable chapter :D

ADORABLE ! how he came over to her bed and almost told her he loved her! YAY!

why do they have a barstool?

OooOooo the love potion. its cute until she 'wakes up' but i dont understand why she was quite that angry, i mean he obviously liked her back and she obviously liked him! GET TOGETHER!

wow! Fred shouldnt of fought back. he WAS the one who brought it on himself. insulting her was not the best way to go.

why did he leave? honestly, he could of jsut apologised and they could of been together. but meh. hes a jerk.

i liked how he said i love you and all that. but why do they even have a phone? LOOLS didnt explain that but doesnt really matter. George should of just kicked his ass back there.

glad they got together at the end! but i dont get why they didnt let themselves love because i mean, they were married! it doeesnt really matter. LOLs

great story!

thanks,

withoutthespaces

lol,i don't know why i found this so funny but right now i'm laughing so much i could cry.i'm so glad i found this story..the first chapter is very promising