would of been better if they died together. but that would of been a typical Romeo and Juliet sorry lol

I love this. I wanted her to be with Ichigo in the anime until I saw him I look forward to reading more. Good work

Orihime died as a human, that means she can still live on as a soul, maybe even become a soul reaper,so why finish the story with a sh!t tragic end like that?

i'm so disappointed ,it's not even funny. it''s not that i am an optimist nor naive..but i can think of like 12 different ways this could have ended that wouldn't have sucked so bad.

Hime-chan? Really? There is much OCCness I would be willing to accept but that is just ridiculous

Thank you for your story ! This is the first im reding wich ending bad and i enjoyed it. Really good writting and émotions are really " réal" compare to bleach character's petsonnalities.
I hope you still writting today farewell!

The story was beautiful.

You need to have her turn hollow herself in this story

its turning into lemon pretty fast...
who is this woman anyway...

Noooo! Such a sad ebding :(
Still, great story, I very much enjoyed it.
:)

bring hime back *cries*... but in all honesty it is a great story:)

Hello, there! I know maybe this review is way too late since this fic finished years ago, but please let me tell you my honest thought! X3

I... LOVE THIS! XD The romance between UlquiHime is really well written here! How their relationship beginp and grows as they keep their interaction every time Ulquiorra visit to feed her. I really enjoy their moments! So sweet! KAWAIII XD what truly impress me in this fic is how your description about Ulquiorra! Very IC! What his thought about Hime and how he develop his feelings for Orihime despite Aizen's order. It's just OH WOW! Thumbs up! I really falling in love with your Ulquiorra! OMG! HE IS SO CUTE HERE! You can bring out his cuteness in his (very) own way :3 Not many people can do that, you know? Well done!

I must admit, I really love all the chapters. Very UlquiHime! But, the ending is not what I expected :'( I don't know why you made the sad ending like that after gave us (reader) such fluffy UlquiHime moments...It broke my heart to read the last chapter T.T I couldn't understand, why? For me, the ending is like totally different story from all the previous chapter. You had provide no indications that Orihime will use her power to Hogyoku, IMHO. What I get was UlquiHime moments with her focus on her feeling for friends and Ulquiorra. You never mention anything about her power and Hogyoku until very last end. It's too hasty for the ending, imo. Because every chapter, you wrote very well like the reason Ulquiorra falling in detail and suddenly you rushing up the end become angst. It make this not "hurt/comfort" anymore, I think "drama" will be more suitable for overall chapters.

However, as UlquiHime fic this still very good one! Thank you for sharing X')

n.b: I'm the 400th! XD XD XD *ignore this*

I...I feel dead.
Just no. I can't. I didn't sign up for this.
*deep inhale* sadness all around. Wow. Uhm. Thank you for writing such a great yet depressing story. Now then, if you'll excuse me, I shall just, you know, curl up in bed and cry my lungs out.
Yeah...goodbye.

im sorry this was a really good story but it was getting a little out of character and was a bit hard for me to read ulquiorra growing embarrassed lol. but other then that it was great

Very good job keeping Ulquiorra IC