lol wtf, how did mello turn into a girl?

Okay... I'm lost. There's some interesting things going on here, but none of them make any sense.

Kay... I'm not going to lie to you... Now I think you're just being lazy or abrupt. I know we don't all have time to sit down and write a masterpiece first thing in the morning, but there is so much more that you could have done with this! Especially considering there's minimal character intoduction and a death... in two paragraphs. I'm going to keep looking, maybe it get's better with time.

Kind of short... a little vague on feelings, but it's a start. I'll totally keep reading though. Mostly because I'm eager to see how this transitions out.

This is so cute so far! I can't wait to read more of it. If I had to say anything though, it might be that you should work a little on your organization. There are a couple of places were someone might get tripped up. No offense, meant.

Fantastic life though!

I liked it. It was very good!

Hehe! XD

This is a very good collection of stories so far. I like how it's going to be about all of the Whammy's guys and girls. You write them all very well too. I hope you update soon, this is very good!

When I read the description and saw there would be B.. I just had to check this out. I love Beyond Birthday and his creepy laughter. :D The marshmallow (LOL MARSH MELLO) part was cute. I like the idea for how he got his goggles. :D /faved

Aw. Cute! I wish I had a friend to roast marshmellows with. XD Marsh-Mellos.