Nice alternative take on Cameron! Well written.

Found your story just recently. I enjoyed it very much. I always thought Cameron new more than what she was telling John and Sarah. Your story filled in those gaps. It would interesting reading if you ever filled in the gaps for the whole series. Thank you for your effort on the pilot.

awwwwwwwwwwww

Wow, this is remarkable!

Very human like Cameron, but still very fun to read.

Dude are you still alive? more Cameron story please!

Another great one-shot! Nice work!

Great work

Really enjoyed it!

:D

Bloody brilliant :)

Great work! John may not yet be ready to understand just how Cameron feels, but she's slowly getting there with him. This is a great interpretation of her character, and fits well with the fact that she appeared so human at the very beginning of the series, then suddenly seems to shift into robotic mannerisms. One has to wonder what John makes of it. It fits with John too. If anyone could truly fall for a cyborg in that future, it would be him.

You also have an effective writing style which goes into perfect detail about her thought processes. I've definitely enjoyed that.

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I liked this very much. The use of characters and the inside look to the back story.

I ship Rayne on Firefly but see I need to add some Terminator SCC to my future writing. I'd really like to see more.

Keep it up.

Amazing story! I love it!

That was a great story.. Very good imagination of Cameron's thoughts and her view on events. I also liked how you made lots of tie-ins to the pilot episode and filled in the details 'behind the scenes'. The J/C element was pretty light and hints at things more to come, which just begs of a sequel..

Good length for a story too. Got the feeling that it was well paced, and not over as soon as it started. I hope you continue this story because it's very promising and has some good ideas - giving Cameron the ability to feel pain to be more human, etc.

Nicely done. I like your take on things - explaining how, at times Cam seems so human, and other times not.

It would be cool to see you continue. I'd love to see your take on some of the stuff her character has been doing.

Good job.

That was interesing for sure!

A different light shed on FutureJohn and Cam.

I'm torn between this sweet and caring Cam...totally in love with her Johna and the one which reminds us often that she has a hyper-alloy combat-chassis!

Great read at any rate!