I can't believe I never came across this story before ! I know it's been years but if you're still active : thank you ! I'm hooked !
And now the continuation ...

What happened to chapter 26? it appears empty

without a doubt, the best SG1 fanfic I've ever had the good fortune to stumble across.

I loved your story. It was well written and vey funny. I also love the genius which is Cynthia.

However there wasn;t a whole lot of Sam/Jack. I assume it is coming soon.

You're nuts.

Basic security protocol for gate travel is that you are old enough to shoot a gun if you want to go through the "big O". Even Felger (and he's the biggest geek at the SGC ever) can shoot - at least in the right direction.

What you're implying is simply irresponsible, and frankly, neither Jack nor Sam would EVER agree to something like that.

I'm sorry, but I actually liked the original idea, Sam and Jack having a daughter - until you made Cynthia a whining brat who always gets her way, and is not even old enough to vote or drink.

I really like to know why you wrote something as unrealistic as this.

Wow! Spent all morning reading this, kept me on the edge of my seat! You really seem to have a good grasp on the characters and the timeline, and, human nature.

Love the story. I'll start on the sequel right away. Keep up the good work.

Totally awsome.

I never suspected that

Charlotte would do such a thing

but that just makes the story all

the more interesting!

Keep up the good work!

This story is unbelievably awsome!

You're a great author, keep up the good work!

Aww it's over glad to hear their will be a sequel. I wonder if Cynthia ever got to go to Atlantis?

I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for writing and sharing it.

I really liked reading this! You did a great job.

I read the words 'the end' and got really concerned! I'm glad to see that you already have a sequel planned-because there's no way you end this there!

I'm glad to see that Cynthia was logical, at least somewhat, about helping Thor-she didn't withold help to get her way, which paints her as slightly more mature-bet she didn't get that from her dad!

Great story. Enjoyed it a lot.

For God sakes the girl built her own stargate. And they treat her like she is two. Keep up the good work.

Thor enters! I see Cynthia's really keen on going to Atlantis. I wonder if she get's her way? Nice chapters!