Congratulations on your first story! I think it was really well done. Very original. Have you had many embarrasing moments by any chance? Can't wait to read the next one!

Aw haha! Loved it! Great for your first fic, update soon!

That was so bloody BRILLIANT! The characters are brilliant! And Will? HAHAHAHA! I kept seeing Orlando's head bouncing up and down in my head during the trampoline bit! His face,hard; jaw, set; brow, furrowed; nose, twitching a bit. It was hilarious! This should be made into a movie!

Lol! Nice story! I just LOVE the occasional modern fic! Especially one revolving around Will! He's just so...Willish! Anyway, VERY nice story! Hmm, you should turn this story into a series of oneshots! That'd be cool!

-Gypsy

it was good!

what do you think of writing about teh real day of teh diner...it would be great.

YEAH! You finally wrote a story...very nice job...I knew you could do it...and it's a different type of story - very orginal...you should be very proud!

Aw. That was awesome. Nicely done for your first story.

Mhmm. Mrs. Bea, eh? Why thankyou. XD

Oh dude I repeat: This is hilarious.