Aww poor Mikey. Ah well, she was be-otch anyway. There's more fish in the sea, Mikey-love...

I like the part in the middle where Ralph was going to blame himself over what ever happened to Mikey. You have feel some sorrow for the turtle for that, but it was a nice comical moment. Great story!

*snickers*Oh Mikey, U so crazy!

I enjoyed reading this story and loved the drama and then the wonderful sibling fluff moments.

por Mikey and don,t we all love older brother comfort

Oh, honey, this made me wanna cry! You have *no idea* how badly I wanted to grab that girl by the throat and pummel her! Poor, poor Mikey. This was truly heart-breaking. My God.

Mikey having that small moment of excited nervousness when he turned to her and realized he was *finally* going to talk to her- and then having the rug yanked viciously out from under him by her... it was hard for me to read but I had to go back and check to make sure she had *actually* said that to him. Ugh.

I love how you made it a 'beauty is skin deep' type of story because that's how I plan to do my own. In fact, the premise is very similar only the girl in my story isn't a... well, I can't say. But it's *very* close only, it's Raph and not Mikey, just to let you know so you don't think I'm ripping you off or anything if you happen to see it in the future.

Anyway, this was wonderful. I'm glad Mikey bounced back but that didn't surprise me because... he's Mikey:) I loved this!

Wow! That was something different! Great, great work! Good idea, well written und the characters behave very believable!Please, please more and:

Greetings from Germany!

Please don't let this be the end. That girl was cruel and vacuous... Mikey didn't deserve that.

Our orange-banded turtle deserves love too.

If you continue, I hope Mikey finds that special someone to repair the damage to his heart: someone patient, loving, and open-minded; because after what happend here, Mikey will certainly be more world-weary and not so keen to meet new humans.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Fantastic story! There's always somebody who loves you!

I really liked this story. I feel that you gave a more realistic view of how someone would REALLY react to seeing a giant talking turtle. Despite how we all think we would react or how we would like to react, the truth is that most people would be scared shit-less. Plus in most of the stories I've read, the meeting of an understanding, unafraid female is just becoming too cliche. Hope you wright another story soon!