Keep going!

NOOOO
It happened again...T_T

Rollar coaster! LOLOL! (Replying to the date thing BTW) How long till the next one? This chapter was amazing and i cannot wait for the next one! i had started to read this before but then i was grounded and i am glad there were more chapters when i wasnt grounded anymore! P.S. i was the one that suggested the idea of Zexion going bling so i should add that i meant teporarily blind. P.P.S. Sorry for spelling! By!

i am not sure if you finished already, but you should make Zexion acually go blind, to add to the story! sorry for my spelling and i hope you use the idea...maybe at least in some other story! thanks, by! P.S. i reeaallyy like your story, going to read what happens next, by for real!

Ah, this is so addicting! I can already tell by the title and your writing style that this story is going to make me cry at some point. :) Please update it sometime! It's quite the lovely story!

Well, you had me laughing so hard throughout this chapter! I love Zexion! He is your classic teenager.

Now the plot begins... I can't wait! *runs off to read next chapter*

What if they go to the carnival?

And then some guy says Zexion is too small and he gets mad and threatens the guy and the guy gets scared and lets him in?

That would be so awesome if you used my idea.

-totally subscribed-

I adore this story; I really do. Your writing is lovely, and the characters are just... perfect.

But it's so darn sad. My heart breaks every time Demyx forgets about Zexion.

Anyway, keep up the great work; hope you update soon. :D

This is the best story ever! I love it!1111!

Wow, so much progress and then it went back to zero. Did Demyx forget to write a reminder or something? Poor Zexion, I mean honeslty. Hmmm going to the beach/pool sounds fun. Zexion will probably complain up a storm. More please!

Hey! Sorry I didn't review last night, I had to go to bed right after I finished the chapter and I didn't have time to leave a proper review, hahahahaha.

Anyway! BEST. CHAPTER. EVER!

I like the whole development with the book; and I really like how seriously Zexion is beginning to think about Dem. It's so sweet!

Will he admit he "likes" him "likes" him soon?

Zexion, why you lie to Demyx like that? What a baka! (yes-got that from the chappy!) But I like how Demy is feeling deja vu...could this be a development in him ever remembering/gaining back his memories?

And Zexy...on top of Dem. xD LOLOLOLOLOL. I love it! And yay! The truck!

"When it's full of all the stuff we've done together..." Perfect! Made my heart go, "d'awwwwww."

"Nice smile." XDXDXDXD

Dem likes Zexy! YAY!

Almost like a date, hahaha. Zexy, you're so the girl!

And Muffin! I love it! :D

BUT WHYYYYY DOESN'T DEM REMEMBER ZEXY AT THE END? Did he lose the notebook! Your preview is not helping me! Let me know as soon as you can! Let me read ahead of time! Hahahaha.

Until next time,

~ Bonny

This is really good. Don't stop writing. And Laser tag is always fun for a date like event.

KYAAA! You updated! So happy!~

Imma gonna go read now. :3

Much love,

Bonny

It's been almost two years... I can't believe I only found this story now. Oftentimes it's Zexion with the problem. But I do love this new angle of storytelling! I'd love to see you update this, but don't rush it because of me! Keep up the good work with this piece!

Your story is very interesting. 0u0

By the way, check out a manga/anime called Katekyo Hitman Reborn, it's really good.