Reviews for The Chains that Bind Us
Mara the Wolf chapter 60 . 2/18
I hate you for abandoning this story.
Sebias of Redwall chapter 25 . 12/2/2019
SO Keetch accepted the offer. I wonder how THAT's gonna go... I can only imagine what the hag will end up doing. *Shudders*

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 23 . 11/27/2019
Wow! I think you handled the betrayal very well indeed! It's realistic that Brink isn't prepared to forgive him just yet, though I hope he will eventually.
I also thought that your joke about this chapter being the end was hilarious. Though, I'd have probably been more convinced if I knew that the story was already 60 chapters long. XD

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 17 . 11/12/2019
Ah, justice is served! The first segment was hilarious (Especially when Brink thought the shrews were dibbuns) XD

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 16 . 11/12/2019
Keetch is definitely the seer. Why else would he be having such weird dreams with hidden meanings?
Very good chapter! I liked all of the dialogue between Keetch and Brink. It's fleshed out their characters a bit more.

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 13 . 11/7/2019
Interesting... So now their free from their chains. Will they stay companions though?

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 11 . 11/5/2019
Ah, and I'm guessing from the "wot" that the two escaped slaves have met the famous Long Patrol.

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 10 . 11/4/2019
You did a good job at making the toads seems like detestable villains. (And fellow toad-eaters to boot!)
I wonder what Keetch's plan will be...

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 9 . 11/4/2019
Ah, so we've got us a Melo, who will most likely (and hopefully) become the abbey warrior. If not that, then chances are he'll drive everybeast crazy until they kick him out. XD (Unless of course he takes up wandering...)

Great chapters!

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 8 . 11/4/2019
*Sniff* So sad... Brink's character has developed more this chapter, so that's good.

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 5 . 11/4/2019
That was...sad. Poor slaves.

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 4 . 11/4/2019
I wonder what'll happen now that the ship has hit a rock... Escape maybe?

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 3 . 10/23/2019
Hmm... So Keetch has now seen what Brink is up to. This should be interesting...

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 2 . 10/23/2019
Yikes! Throwing up on the captain is going to earn him any points...

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Sebias of Redwall chapter 1 . 10/3/2019
Alrighty, I don't know if you still get notifications for reviews, but I thought I'd start reviewing so that I could keep track of where I am. And also, while I'm at it, I can help ya break into 800 reviews. XD

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