That was so friggin sad! Gahhhhh! But I loved it all the while D: one of the best Near x L stories I've read, actually.

;.;

sad.

you stretched the ending out; it made it a biy raggedy. .

i suggest going back and eliminating words and sentences you don't need towards the end.

But it was cute overall! xP

That's sad... DX

Oh why does this story not have any more reviews. This story brought me to tears. Not many things can do that. I am one who doesn't cry much in fact I rarely cry. You have talent.I could picture everything perfectly, the flashbacks and poor little Near crying his eyes out. Amazing job. I hope that you write more.

TTTT this actually made me cry...and I don't say that about most sad stories! MARVELOUS(sp?) WORK! WAH! L-KUN! *goes to sob with Near*