Good, but wish Hinata was fighting more she cried a bit to much which is fine, but think she shouldn't have started crying just cause the cloud ninja called her weak.

That cliff hanger was very evil though.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

This was cute Naruto and Hinata are being all cute and fuzzy. Love how they are both liking the interment contact.

Also Hinata knows a lot about ramen no surprise there Naruto, bet she learned all about it for you.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

No more fox naruto

Your Naruto is weaker than canon. At this age, he was already God-like in terms of power. We all know after the war when he was only 17, he was the most powerful shinobi alive, aside from Sasuke. But in your story, you made him weaker almost in every fight while your OC, Mitsuki, gets more powerful. She is like the perfect kunoichi and almost great in every aspect. She’s better than everyone in the village. Smarter than Shikamaru, really? Better nose than Inuzuka, and now you seem to make her a seal master as well. What the heck is going on with Naruto? Up to this point, I would expect him to have already mastered the Sage Mode and the Kyubi’s chakra. But he seemed to be getting weaker while he got older. It’s really disappointing to read.

Then even his genin team, Amaya, you made her stamina greater than Naruto, Naruto has the greatest stamina in the canon. He can outlast anyone. It was his lineage. But now you said Amaya was like him when he was 15. Then Minoru, hidden power? He can only have hidden power if he’s a jinchuriki or maybe a bloodline. Kojirou, I think he’s pretty normal to me which is fine i guess.

You have a good start but you need to stop the unending problems with Naruto. He never progressed in your story, I thought he was going to be a seal master after a year of studying those scrolls he got. Then those anti-Naruto group, it’s crazy to think that the Hokage never did anything about it. If there were attempts to his life, the Hokage should have never assigned him a genin team. Maybe, he should just train for ANBU.

I would have preferred if Naruto won against Mitsuki even if he’s not at his hundred percent. He has the most chakra, and compared to others from his age group, they would look like ants. And the fact that he avoided using ninjutsu, he should have lasted longer than her.

Ch 18 Better to be at least 10 of 20 to analyse the opponent instead using the shadow clone army of the HORDE. And smarter Naruto or technology inventor ,bloodline gift special ability or hanyo or full demon to be stronger and still caring souls but I prefer to leave that SHIT HOLE FOR A VILLAGE AND GO WHATEVER EXEPT AKATSUKI. UNLESS IS GOOD AKATSUKI.

Did you forget something?
Meje2?
Don't Forget about me...

I'll remInd you next time you Forget...

Omg, finally made it! I finally read all the chapters! Wow i cant wait for the next! And could you send me the link for deavian art? Please! I want to see exactly how is the story going!

Great story!

Awesome chapter! I liked that last one too! I'm curious how Naruto will confront Pein. Will Sasuke help him? Looking forward to next chapter!

Read you story the last 3 days and I love it! It's been more than 2 years since you last updated...buy I do hope you continue one day! I was diappointed it stopped before Naruto could fight Pein and Takashi aknowleging Sasuke as his father

I loved this Fanfic but it's not done yet so Complete it or Th Kazindo 3 will come after you and I'am one of the 3.

Lord and Master of the Shadow's:Meirai

Please update

What is Naruto in this story a fucking moron? Regardless of the villagers, he was JUST TOLD that the hunter will be after Hinata and he runs outta the village? There is stupid and then there is FUCKING MONUMENTAL ICONICALLY COMPLETELY CHILDISHLY FUCKING DUMB-ASS RETARDED!

Wow this is so cool