this is really, really, really, funny, I died laughing!

I have never read (or wrote) one like this. It is too cute!

I bet Sess was mortified by that even though he didn't want to show it. I would have said babies come from the . Then I'd say I wouldn'tmind making babies with him but then he'd probably kill me.

that fanfix was sooo short you stouped asshole you suck i am going to read something els.

LMAO WTF? at first i was like O.o and then as i read on i said to myself 'Hell nawz"

_- very funny and very good for ur first fic

My mom was in the room when I reaqd this, and she could tell it was one of those: "It is not right to laugh at this . . . but it's too dang funny!" moments for me.

You should continue the story. The more you write, the better you will get I guess. And I agree with Kairou Watoshimi, the storyline goes on really fast. It’s like one second this happens and then that, and oh we’re on the next happening already... Perhaps you could tell a little more of how the person in which viewpoint you write in feels about things and what is happening around them. Also adding little things like describing the place, the characters and how they look like could be nice (for example telling in Kagome’s words in her head how she sees Sesshoumaru). It gives the story more depth and then the readers can use their imagination in picturing everything in their minds from your written words. But it's your story so you decide, I'm just offering some ideas:)

ha, this is funni! Rin's all 'how rude, i asked a question' priceless!

PLEASE CONTINUE AND MAKE MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS STORIE PLEASE

Its kind of nice and surprising but still too fast. Try 2 make this into a story.

OMG! That is so funny. I do reccomend that you make a sequal to that. One chapter is okay but i think it would be great if there was a couple more, but you are the writer. Please check out my own. Thanks alot.

how funny, i ready your story cause you read my story two mistakes, really really funny!

i liked this maybe you can make it into a stroy and just see where it goes

Now will you do me a favor, Inuyasha and SIT, SIT, and you know just for the hell of it SIT some more!

Love this line! Cute one-shot! very humorous, especially how Inuyasha sai he didn't care if she warmed Sesshomaru's bed, as long as she was back by morning. LOL.

Write some more like this, you're good!

haha that was a cute one shot and thanks for the reveiw i'm glad you like the story

keep up the awesome work

-MoD