woah. I love how original this is. I hope you plan on coming back to this because this is utterly amazing

OMG I SAW THE LYRICS AND I BEGAN SINGING ALONG! I love this song! It made me cry so much!

I would like to read more, please?

This is one sadistic type of sh***t. I know the author has mental issues.

This story is rather boring. The main character is too OOC.

I managed to get to here and I can't even continue. The basic plot was fine but the complete disregard for any kind of Grammar or Punctuation ruins it.

1. When a new person speaks, you start a new paragraph.
2. Loading your work with dialogue only makes it choppy and boring.
3. "You put punctuation at the end of quotes." - Like so. "Not outside", - Not so. Don't forget the punctuation in the proper places!
4. You capitalize new words in a sentence or quote.

A.) Unless it's a continued quote. Ex:) "Unlike you," Mortimer began, voice haughty and annoying, "I don't throw myself around like a fool!" You can choose to use an endash(-) or neglect it when you continue the rest of the sentence. Your choice.

5. You have many run on sentences and fragments. And for the first time in my life, I've been able to see another person's dangling modifiers.

It has potential, but the whole body needs a lot of work and a lot of us cannot continue reading with so many mistakes so obvious in the text.

You should also put up an OOC warning somewhere, because seriously, very out of character. It would prevent you from getting any drama over it from stuck up fans.

Finally, a Beta is absolutely necessary until you can write without one!

I'd love more

Hope you continue this story, it is really good! I can't wait to read about how Kagome and L meet back up! Please update soon!

This has been one interesting and addicting story. I was intrigued with the idea of a blind and abused Kagome being the hand of justice. I'm all caught up and sad that you haven't updated. I really wanted to see more Kagome x ryuuzaki interaction. Please keep up the good work and update soon.

I love your story please update it real soon. Thanks

Omg! There aren't exact word to describe how amazing this is! I can't wait to read more! I really hope you update soon!
You know,your writing is awesome! I like it so much!
I really can't wait, read you soon!

Mello is finally here. Who gets Kagome after L's death? Please update this wonderful story.

more please can i pretty pretty please have more

Oh oh oh finish it please

Wait is she blind or not?