this chapter made me smile, it was really quite adorably written!

Hahaha as always loved the ending

aww.. again. I'm speechless. Perfect ending by the way.

Awwwwww cue fluffy moment. I loved it! I wish I could write romance like you! My stuff turns out cheesy and lame! LOL

You make my heart go GGAAAAAAAHHHHHH. And several other noises that all translate about the same.

Oh how I've missed your writing sosososososo much!

I'd like to think that this chapter may receive much praise and adoration for the simple fact that, while we know it's fromt he perspective of Atlanta... the you totally means us.

Or me. Nope, definitely me.

Mmmmmmmm, earthshattering love-making. Alllll mine. And video games and movies and jfklsjdflkasfdl.

I've just exploded, so much so I could've been used to end the second World War... but with love and such things.

But seriously, I loved it, and I missed your writing andiwantarchie-what?-, but yes, I gahed. Just for you.

I LOVED THE ITALICS, SO I'LL TELL YOU IN CAPS LOCK. It was a really personal touch, and I think it gave the framework such personality and utter archtastic cuteness.

I'm going to see how many times I can say the word Archie. I have missed saying it so:

I gave up. The world can't take anymore. No copy-pasting, baby.

Anyways, I love you. Did you know that? High five for second person.

FROM ACROSS THE BORDER SEPERATING OUR PASSION. DEEP PASSION.

insightful and entertaining :)

i really enjoyed this

So, what on earth is up with that tall character? She seems weird to me. I cannot relate to her in the slightest? Who would nosebleed and then faint in Archie's presence? Not me. That's for sure.

Though that girl with the thing for Jarchie with hair as bright as the sun (IT'S A LIE. IT'S BROWN NOW). I get her. I bet we'd be friends.

The short one is weird. Who talks like that? ONLY HAPPY-MAKING AWESOME PEOPLE.

LIKE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE US.

And Jay's ugly shirt is a WINNER okay. Jayfar knows how to accessorize.

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

YOU JUST MADE MY DAY. INSIDE AND OUT.

THIS WAS JAYTASTIC, ARCHIEGASMIC AND WONDERFUK ALL IN ONE. NOT EVEN ODIE COULD INVENT SOMETHING THIS SPECTACULAR.

And thank goodness Randoms will go on for one more chapter.

I totally call dibs on that psycho blonde. She's insane, but she likes Jarchie. She's cool with me.

"My name's King Dem, but call me K.D.,

I rule Numdemania from the mountains to the seas!

...

...

somethingsomethingsomething

I CAN FIT A FAMILY IN MY PANTS!"

I can't remember it, hahahaha!

This was an awesome chapter, and silly, silly Archie! I can't believe he forgot about Atlanta's labour! I would have been FREAKING THE SHIZZLE OUT if my wife went into labour... and if I was a man...

Well...

Oh, Jay. You and your ugly shirts. That made me laugh as well. Quite hard. But I think he might wear such ugly shirts to tone down his Jaytasticness because, think about it, if Jay was dressed just as rediculously sexy as he is, then the world would implode and EVERYONE would want Jay. And that would make Archie very upset and jealous that Jay would have so many potential lovers and then they wouldn't get to spend their Jarchie times together and make the cereal that makes them so happy. Hahaha.

The last paragraph made me snicker with joys. You know what you'll be covered in soon, Theresa? You and Jay, together, will be bathed in sweat- but don't call it that, call it the GLISTEN OF VICTORY.

Because you and Jay are WINNERS, Theresa. WINNERS.

NAnd Anya, you, Nuu and myself would be epic if we ever met the kiddos. And we would totally come across like that hahahaha.

I love how the last line implies that she's gonna meet Jay :), and makes us think about how.

By the way, do you remember how we used to joke about me being like Theresa? Well, I think you completed that by making her a WRITER. Gosh Anya, haha.

I loved it though, Archie is such a goof.

I love him.

I love you.

MAKE THE LAST ONE GOOD MISSY, or else I'll cry.

I probably will, either way.

~Nuuoa

This was really sweet.

I'm making the assumption she's going to be meeting Jay pretty darn soon.

And Atlanta being a littly nymph at her wedding, and Archie being all upset about a tux but wearing one anyways for her was so in character and so very sweet.

Theresa the writer! That's a new one for jobs she 'takes on'.

D: THE LAST? NO. NOT THE LAST. Pleeaassee?

Dem

Is this AU? Because it seems that Theresa hasn't met Jay yet, or known about the seven teenagers destined to save the world from an evil god yada yada yada (: Which is delightfully abstract and cool.

I like the last three paragraphs, it has this mystical feel to it, and it seemed so right. (: The fact that Theresa is a writer, and has to be writing about a story (and that she chooses the COTT plotline!) is so awesome.

Sad that this is the second last random. Maybe you could do a sequel, like the Randoms 2 or something? Hahaha, just a suggestion. But anyway, I will miss it.

wow love the last line

And we thought she was over Pan, guess not ;)

MELLIIANN.

Yes! Adorable, Anya, it was such a change of pace. It was well-put, but still captivating.

Like shadows, hmm? Unstarted, but still showing enough light to make you know that it's there, and to seek it. You didn't blind me, you made me see.

Sorry to pull a Nuu on you there but that's how I felt. Also, my heart just wrenched for Odie in the opening sentence, I actually thought that it was Theresa fleeing monsters for a minute-but no!

And Odie, we know you dress normal, I just think the other kids can't accept the awesomeness of your fro. But we do! :)

~ Nuu

(ALSO-HAPPY BIRTHDAY, FOR THE MILLIONTH UBERTH TIME)