Dude that was an awesome story I've heared some really good ones over the years but that one takes the sweet cherry pie and whip cream toppings so far, I mostly like the romance between Josh & Yoko and there isn't much team galaxy fanfic but I'm gonna fix that and make some more when I become a writer and Josh & Yoko is my favorite pairing, you should make an after-story to this it'd be epic STAY COSMIC!

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oh I just love your story...please write more stories about josh and yoko TT

Very,very cool,I must say!

Its been a long time I didnt read a fanfic that caught me,from the beginning,to the end.

It was interesting,and funny.

i love the story 3 : D

good job!

That was brilliant! Not to mention incredibly long. Still, I liked it. Great job! I love how you described the kissing scene; that was pure magic. Personally, I don't think Josh and Yoko make the best pair. Actually, I don't see any proper pairs at all. I would say a few things about this work though that could be better. Well, actually just one thing.

I noticed that you jump back and forth with past and present verbs. If this occurs too much, well, it can throw readers off just a bit. I couldn't really tell if you were trying to write in past or present tense (as in, it just happens now). You seemed to start off with the past-tense verbs but when you suddenly switched into present-tense verbs that was quite confusing. I had no idea at which point you were writing about. Stick to one type of verb, past or present tense.

Despite this, though, please keep writing! ;)

~Underwaterwriter

i love the story..nice one,hope i could read more of your stories.

Aww :3

That was cute

that is a really random ending to a really good story...tiny bit rushed but i liked it! _

~*~Fallen Rain~*~

Absolutely great!

Thx for making your Team Galaxy story a bit more serious!

:') i loved it!

Aw soo cute and sweet i loved josh and yoko such a kawaii pairing -

Wa!

How beautifull! **

It was really very interesting,but,at the end,sincerely,I cant see Josh saying "I love you". xD

Aww That was so so so sweet a little OOC but it worked and it was AMAZIN...i wanna see more stories from u!

So Sweet! ]

A little..actually a lot OOC in here..especially from KP but I expected was the second OOC,with Yoko last,but she is a girl so it's a little less that does NOT mean girls are OOC.