Adding that kind of stuff to the whole Dr. Gero thing for dramatic effect honestly wasn't in the best taste, but it's not something that would make me leave the fic, since it's been okay so far.

Good story.

A beautiful and very well-written story. I loved every word of it! And I was quite happy how you put in a lot of deep, emotional scenes between 17 and 18. Very few stories give them a (somewhat) happy ending and I love them. They're two of my favorite characters in the entire series. Thank you for sharing this wonderful slice of heaven. (:

Great story

I simply love your story. You put a lot of though and effort in it.

Plus I absolutely adore Bluma and egeta in this Fanfic. Very well done. Keep the goog work up! It was great to read it. Thank you

I think I might cry. That was so beautiful! I read the whole thing from beggining to end in one sitting (10 hours including dinner and talking on the phone). The comedy of Vegeta was PRICELESS! The romance was INCREDIBLY enviable. . . like I am SO jealous right now. The ending was lovely and sends an almost symbolic message: Krillen doesn't even realize how worthy he is of all that he has proving that, ultimately, you get what you put in. All-in-all? I LOVED it! The only thing I was SLIGHTLY disappointed in was a missed oportunity of GREAT foreshadowing. I think in Part 1 you have 18's flashback with 17 about "just remember to invite me to your wedding." Yeah, like the whole rest of the story I was like "that will DEFINITELY come up later" and I was sad to see that I was wrong. Oh-well. Still a Top-5 best romance story I've ever read. I LOVED it and THANK YOU for writing this brilliant piece of literature.

Sincerely,

Notorious P.A.T.

A very sweet and touching K/18 fic, well done.

O.O WOW Vegeta gives up WAY too easy, the Prince of Saiyans is the under the control of an "idiot human", kinda wish I could se him be controlled so easy P

Nice in-character 18, very much like her.

hey bulma never wanted to kill goku, she wanted to use him as a bodyguard in her quest

I liked the story a lot and i hope you continue to write great stories just like this!

*sniff sniff* that was good long but good

AWESOME STORY!

I'm tempted to squeal like a fangirl, it's so good! I'm glad you wrote this.

Oh, crap... you made me laugh and then cry repeatedly... damn it... *rubs face furiously*