"Professor Dumbledore, Professor Snape is going to kill Umbridge. You might not want to let him go." One of the most hilarious lines!

One of the most well written stories I've ever read.

This is an excellent fanfic. I hope you will be posting when your muse comes back. Good luck in your RL.

Good

i really tried to read your fic and enjoy it, but i couldn't. it felt like i was reading j.k rowling books all over again and that is not why i read fanfictions

i didn't know J.K wrote fanfinctions...

You need to work on your apostrophes. It is a good ide to think about what they are replacing and to remember that to make something plural you don't add one.

As much as I like this story, over 64 chapters is way to long to wait for harry to find out that snape is his farther...

NO! DON'T TORTURE US EVEN FURTHER! AFTER ORDER OF THE PHOENIX! HOW DARE YOU?!
*breaks down sobbing* Sirius...

Please continue I love this story a loooooooooooot

Tripe. Faithless, spineless character.

I thought in the first chapter you'd have a decent Lily, one who cared. Not one that wavered everywhere the emotional construct spins. I'd be ashamed to have her as a mother.

This is a great story...please update it..

Poor Harry. This is a great story and I hope you continue writing it.

Ok now that I'm hooked
Where do I find the rest

Even though it took forever for snape and Harry
I really enjoyed your story
Excellent writing