Reviews for Heroes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liked this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This brilliant! You captured both Han and Obi-Wan's character very well. I really enjoyed it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really, really liked this one |
![]() ![]() ![]() You took the time to read and review one of my stories, so I thought I would do the same for you. This is an interesting story. I like the idea of Han confronting Obi-Wan about the Clone Wars stuff. I never thought of something like this happening. Great job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Han doesn't even know what he's getting into here, lol. I really liked the Han and Obi-Wan interaction, you don't get to see a lot of that. Nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! I hate the way they've moved the review button, it's really confusing. Anyway - you're right! I'm so sorry - I had no IDEA that these seemed to be so similar. If you like, I can take mine down? Since you got there first, and yours is obviously WAY better than mine? ;P “Kids pretended to be Jedi when they were young, even the ones like me. We pretended that magic actually mattered. Then the wars ended—well, the Empire ended them—and we found out that it didn’t.” I love that line! It's so cynical and real ... and Han-ish, if you know what I mean. You have Han and Ben's voices down really well, something I'm not sure if I ever manage. “No,” said Kenobi. “We are not the heroes.” Brilliant line, really powerful. “Why didn’t you change your names?” Han asked, exasperated. “At least Luke’s.” I never got this, either ... WHY? I mean, if they were as famous as they say they were, then ... This was an amazing piece, really flowing and poetic. I'm so sorry it's so much like mine, I hadn't read yours before D: If you'd like me to take mine down, please tell me - I'd be happy to! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Han's last paragraph. In this scene you can see him transitioning from an admirer of the Jedi, left over from his childhood, to someone more bitter. This is a stunning story and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before now. Not many Han and Obi-Wan fics out there. Keep it up! VFA |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... That was good! They're all in character! Han's last line smacks of what he'd usually say in a situation like this. Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an astounding story - powerful, poignant and wonderfully executed. The characters are spot-on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool! I'm glad my friend gave me the link to this. This is really good! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh this is very good. you have a great understanding of both Obi-Wan's and Han's characters and i've enjoyed reading your work |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really unique idea, awesomely executed too. I love fics that show Han's tough exterior cracking in a well-done way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! I loved this! So well done, I could hear their voices. You absolutely nailed the characters! And I loved that last paragraph. Oh, please consider adding some more to this! I'd really like to hear the conversation between Luke and Han. Absolutely wonderful! A beautiful little masterpiece! :) |