OMYGOD. WHERE WAS THIS BACK WHEN I WAS A KID OBSESSING WITH THIS PAIR? IT'S BEEN TOO LONG. I HAD MISSED A STORY THIS FUNNY. GAWD. I LOVE THIS. PLEASE! WRITE MOTE HITSUKARIN.

poor ichigo overprotective bastard.

I liked your version of ichigo beter then the cannon.

I absolutely loved this.

AWWW xD
I love it xD

TAKE THAT ICHIGO! A little rhyming can totally undermine a brother's overprotectiveness so SHARING IS CARING! I love how much he cared about Rukia and how he practically stalked Karin all the way to the field. The part with Yuzu and Jinta trying to sneak out was awesome. His entire attention was averted to Karin getting home late. The best part was definitely how much he hated Toushiro though. It made this whole story work a whole lot funnier. Yeah, Ichigo is going to learn how to share after how many years.

~yume824

' push her off a cliff.' seriously?

:O OMG SOO PRICELESS.! I love the ending! Yay HitsuKarin.! xD I really love how you write, it's just all so, y'know... perfect! Lol :D Fave part:

'He could seriously hurt Karin.

Or leave her to the hollows.

Or push her off a cliff.'

Lol, what the hell Ichigo.? Seriously? Your so over exaggerating xD

:D lol, seriously I can't stop grinning right now xD

~Frosty

Haha. I loved it. Ichigo's little narratives were hilarious!

Karin seems to go tumbling off cliffs quite a bit in Ichigo's imagination, doesn't she?

Cute story. Good job!

MoS

yes yes yes. I pictured Ichigo as a VERY protective brother. The way that he's protective over friends applies to his sisters. I like how YUZU snuck Jinta into the house. That was funny. hah, good story!

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nice one :) overprotective ichigo is funny

i love the phrase sharing is caring.

i use it all the time when i want something from others. :D

i love the ending...its hilarious xD

loL ;D