Excelente

I first read this like a year ago... I laughed so much...

I re-read it between yesterday and today... I laughed even more...

This story is EPIC... It's my favorite TalaBryan fic... And i'm very selective with this pairing.

Oh wow, I'm only in Chapter One yet I'm already thoroughly enjoying your story. I like the way you tell it and the characters are all in character, it makes me so happy.

Boris arrived, I'm curious how you portray him. xD

Well, onto the next chapter! I'm adding this to my favorites now :)

Ha! I love the way this is written. Direct and entertaining and for some reason, I can certainly see the characters acting like this. Especially Tala and Bryan. You've really captured their hidden insanity well.

Although I'm not a big yaoi fan, I love the idea and the possible romance between Tala and Bryan. TalaxBryan is a pairing I can tolerate.

I love the dialogue in this too especially the comments regarding Tala's clothes. "It makes you look like a deflated fruit" was a classic.

Oo Bryan has arrived.

~Aquila

There is only one word to dicribe this... FANTASTIC! You really have a way with words. I luaghd my arse off and I cried... yes I bloody did. I cried when Bryan left home, I am a real wuse. I loved how you used Ion. I myself am a Beyblade fanfiction writter and I hardly ever use the boy because I never know what to do with him. Well over all you did a wonderful job. You should check out my first posted fanfiction. It is also a Beyblade one called Rise of the Beasts, it has Bryan and Tala love in it. So over all it was geart. I enjoyed it very much.

Allo, I am enjoying your story very much so far. It's simple yet great. I loved the whole BLT senerior. very funny. cant wait to read the rest. You shall hear from me again when I have completed reading your story. Till then.

AWSOME story but his name is Bryan KUZNETSOV thats how you spell his sur-name :)

Wow! I don't know about you, but I' barely see stories with more than ten reviews! Seriously!

I was very impressed with it. It was funny (and I don't laugh very often when I read), cute, and interesting. Great Job! :)

I loved Bryan's family! :D

Hei... I just LOVE this story... It's just so good and I can just read this story over and over...

Love from Trizzy.. XD

aw~! this wuz so cute. I was practically dieing in laughter at the 'NO DEFLOWERING' part. :P haha, I can't imagine Kai saying that...

Garland and Brooklyn were so sweet...Tala was right...Brooklyn did end up fainting somewhere.

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-HK

*cough* haha XD TxB is soo cute...haha. Bryan's such a playboy...i need to hire him and Tala thou...they're horrible muses...but necessary...

Tala- Nice to know you love us.

Me- Shove it Ivanov, go make out w/ Bryan will ya.

Bryan- *cough* if anything it'll be me making out w/ Tala

Me-...uh...right...

:D

It was funny and sweet and well written! hehe nice job! I liked it very much... there isn't really much fanfic that focuses on Bryan and Tala as the main couple ne? I'm glad that you did one and it turned out great! bye!

I ADORE THIS FIC!

i was never into TalaxBryan before until i read this fic and now i am a happy convert!

i like the dose of realism in the 'coming out of the closet' bit...cos i noe coming out of the closet is NEVER easy! (whether u r gay or lesbian)

n it was so damn hilarious too! i was laughing my head off the whole time! (and now i am without a head)

GOOD JOB!

-Princess of Pluto

I actually found myself laughing out loud, way before it even registered that I'd read something funny. It that don't say it all I don't know what does.

In the case that that didn't say it all:

I love this story

kudos!

I don't know why, but there's something inherently hilarious about the image of Tala being attacked by a samurai in his bed.

I'm actually still giggling just thinking about it o.0

crazy _