One would give their soul for a sequel! Sweet. Thank you.

This is so beautifully written. I was like...drooling(?) when reading this story. Not about the plot because it's PWP or plotless but how you two describe the act of sex in artistic way. Yes, the majority of this story is sex and like 5% plot with Hatsuyo and the extinction of InuYoukai but man... I've read many pwp fanfic but this... for SessInu, this is the best one.

The sex between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha... it'may looks like lustful or mating season driven sex but the deep of romance between them... wooow it's so touching. How it started from sex then turned to real feelings was soo...aaah I'm melting. I was an RP-too (in Bleach verse) and I'm totally understand the way you presented this story. For people who never knew RP it may confusing but I enjoyed it so much! From two POV with detailed description about it, it's so amazing!

When I read other reviews about the rape, I delayed to read this but I'm still curious. After I read, well it's not as bad as I thought. It doesn't mean I agree with Inuyasha' action coz it's hard gore with the blood, tessaiga and etc. I dislike it but I imagined worse than that.

All in all thumbs up for you and your RP partner! This is a masterpiece! And I'm not saying this as writer fanfiction but more as a RP-er. The character's feeling development was excellent! Both of you portrayed the chara very well imo. Thank you so much for sharing this story!

The night I decided to start reading this, you guys kept me up until 3:30! I hope you're proud of yourselves (as you should be)!

It was going well but then you made Sesshomaru get brutally raped. Way worse than what he did to the disturbing hanyou brother so i am stopping here...a shame really but inuyasha went overkill...

I'm pretty dang happy with how this ended... but why isn't there a chapter where Inuyasha takes Sesshomaru gently? He was so brutal and Sesshomaru was so ashamed that that happened to him, I kinda wanna plead with you to write a chapter where Inuyasha takes care of Sesshomaru. Please? I know it's been awhile, but I hope you decide to.

Thanks for sharing!

Ahh I hate that it was rushed but at least it was finished. I'm glad I read through to the end even though I was afraid Yasha would be the dominant from now on. Though I understand he was simply frustrated and angered at the time of that act.
Anyway. Great story. This was wonderful and sad to see it go.

I love Yasha youkai! So beautifully submissive. And Sess! Realizing his feelings. Love it.

Damn. I like the way you portrayed Sess I think you got his personality and responses down quite well.
You guys did an amazing job and I was just wondering if they would rut when yasha was pregnant. I hope so lol.
And who is plotting on the puppy?

That rutting was so fantastically written. And I don't even mean that in a freaky fan girl way. It was so realistic. The emotions are palpable and intense . amazing job.

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He's pregnant again.. so he drank that potion again?

I loved the story, but it seemed like the story was wrapped up too quickly. I would have liked to see more of the couple's life together. But other than that I love the story and I cannot wait to read more of your work.

Omg that was a beautiful ending and the story was just breathtaking. Wish it was longer but am definitely satisfied. I wish we got more of a peak into sesshomaru and inuyasha as parents though. Lol although from the looks of it sesshy is a damn good father lol

The form which the story's written is confusing. It feels like reading two separate stories. I'll be reading Sesshoumaru's and when I get to Inuyasha's, I get "wait, what? I thought no words were spoken." It makes the storyline boring and the reader an unnecessary reading. The slow development of their relationship is also making it dull and add how it's written... NO. For me, you write the chapters way too long with little to none REAL HAPPENINGS. I meant no offense, I just feel like saying what I think.
Great story though.