aww, loved the ending

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i've only just read the first chapter and i already love itt :)

expect more revieve from 'I dont write I read'

i love your stories! they r absolutely the best! they are so IC too! plzzz keep on writing other stories i loved this one!

awww... so cuh-yute! you're an amazing writer, so keep up the good work! it's sad, becasue i just finished FANG and reading this just makes me even more PO'ed at him for leaving max.

I liked what you were trying to do. It has the potential of a greaat story. But it went too fast. Now I'm not sure if this was meant to be like that, but I felt that there just wasn't enough detail for me to really get into the story. I believe you have great potential as a writer, but writing can't be rushed. If you don't have enough time to do a certain part, don't just try and then try to finish it later. Sure you don't have to do the book all at one time, but still. You have to give it your all. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.

Aww, cute

xTonksx

Whoa, just whoa

that was perfect

um, omg! i am totaly in love with ur writing! i seriously think this shoud have been in the book! you have to be a writer or something wen u grow up! lol

hello! i just started reading some fan fiction for maximum ride because its my favorite book and max and fang are the best couple ever! i think you really got down the feeling of the book and it's really good. it's better than a lot of others out there. for your first one, it's really amazing. great work!

This is adorable! So sad and happy...

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loved it! so frikin cute! :P

awww i love it :) very sweet.

I do love Max and Fang together. That was great. :)

AW

i love it! so adorable.