OMG I loved it. You really did have a very good idea and put nicely in the word page XDD
To favs ;)

We got a lot of Ange's pov during the chaptered story, so its really great to see what was going through George's mind.
I need to get an account so I can fave all these awesome fics lol

Nice insight into George's thoughts! ]

This is very well written!

I loved the idea and the way you conveyed George's emotions, it was really efective. Good stuff ]!

I'm not sure what to say about this one other than I liked it and I can somehow relate to it. Don't ask me how I can relate because I have never been in the exact same situation before but I am fairly sure I've dealt with something similar you know six of one half a dozen of the other type of similar.

anyway thanks for sharing.

Fantastic. I got chills.

this was great, a one-derful one shot! My fav start was "Dear Angelina, funny story, I used to fancy you when we were at school" lmao. I loved this!

That was so effing awesome, I love this story and does it, perhaps, tie in a bit with your other story: 'A million hours left to think of you'? Or something like that. It sounds as if it is.

Anyways it was a wonderful idea and challenge. I love it and its quite interesting.

You are a great writer! I love your George and Angelina stories. You capture them so well.

Amazing. You really caught George spot on, angst and all.

"Dear Angelina, a bloke isn’t supposed to feel this way about the girl his dead brother was going to marry"

That really captures their relationship, the way I see it. And you've done a wonderful job of depicting it.

Oh, I just love this. Poor George. I love the whole idea of Fred bing dead being more of an obstacle than him being alive. I especially liked "Dear Angelina, a bloke isn’t supposed to feel this way about the girl his dead brother was going to marry".

Great job.

Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant!

Once again you've captured all of George's emotion when it comes to Angelina. Forbidden lust, guilt, remorse, fear, need, passion. I always enjoy reading your stories. Well done!

Well wow...

Love it with an intense, firey passion!

but then suddenly your twin brother was dead, and somehow that was more of an obstacle than his being alive.

this is pretty much the exact fic that i wanted to write about this subject, more or less. i absolutely adore the above line - it sums up the whole one-shot nicely and really grasps george's feelings, i think, rolling them up into one. the end is quite depressing..."there wouldn't be a letter" even though i'm really dying for there to be, and i'm sure angelina (MUST) feel the same.

great one-shot. :) i LOVED it.

~angelface04