Drew was so whipped at the end. /

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To tell you the truth I thought that once May was done reading the story and going to go talk to Drew, I thought it would either be awkward, she would beat the crap out of him, or confront him on the story about themselves. But it was a funny story so I will give ya props on that always looking for a good humorous story, and you just made my day ;) keep writing I hope :)

Oh gosh, my family now thinks I'm an absolute lunatic after witnessing me laughing non-stop while reading this fic. Who doesn't like match-making Pokemon? Bravo!

hahahaha blaziken and roselia were very... imginative?

LOL. Hilarious xD

Roseliaaa! She's STILL awesome. Even when all she says is "Rose, rose, rosel" xD

And Blaziken :D I lava that guy.

Hooray for matchmaking Pokemon! :3

Wait wait what ? :p drew a middle aged man(40-60y old) dating may a teenage boys sister so can't be that old may be around 20 or even less:p wow sorry just bit yuk:p kind of a big age difference don't you think:p

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Hey there! I liked this! Mainly because you actualy gave Blaziken a role in it that stand's out. Most people ad him in theyr Drew and May storyes but they don't pay him much if any atention at all. I mean c'mon the guy play's a realy and I mean REALY big role in her life, for Pete's sake he's her first pokemon, I'll stop ramblinfg before I go on a rant about how great he is and how he didn't get ennough screen time on the show! Now then, this story was great! I was eating wile reading it and I was close to choking on my food whit laughter a few time's 'cus of how funny it is! You are legendary! I'll go back and read it over now!

Chu!~

OMG, what is there about this that one can't like? I mean, the Matrix reference, May's Bikini, harley's monologue, blazikens profound and vulgar language, and of course Rosalia's plan, perfect. Not to mention that this has to be the funniest thing in the world. For somebody who is typing in the dark and avoiding capital letters, also trying to to wake family members, I had some silent giggles slip through the barriar, making them not so silent. Great Great Great! Typing in the dark sucks!

AH-DOR-ABLE! I love it!

(I send out boring reviews like this one... -.-')

a great story! even if bond's little pocket pistol wasn't in it. keep up the good work!

That was pretty cool! I still don't get why Drew wasn't in a bikini though!

aw...you couldn't put Bond's classic Walther PPK .380 in here? (Or more modern his P99, in 9mm) oh well, great story, update soon!

This is awesome! Love it! _

5:06 p.m. Joyce1237

...did may lock herself if the jail... please say no...did i read it wrong?..lol... I LOVE IT! ...

"Why can't you get kidnapped when I'm not on vacation? "

"Oh, I'm sorry, Mr. Rose. Next time, I'll try to work my abductions around your schedule. How's next Friday work for you? "

Drew hopped up, pulled May to her feet, then pushed her swiftly backwards as a laser blasted through the beam where she had stood. "Sorry, Friday doesn't work for me. I'll have to get back to you, ok? "

that is the best paragraph ever! omg! i laughed soo much!