beautiful. what a fitting tribute to david palmer.

Wow. Incredible one-shot. The emotion behind this story is just incredible. This was an interesting couple to focus on, and one that I don't think I've ever read a fic based on, but I really liked that you did that. It gave a fresh perspective on David Palmer's death. This was incredibly well written, very in character, and even funny at some parts (David showing up stuttering like a teenager was something I laughed at). Awesome job on this!

This is really well written, very sensitive and really observant of the way they parted in S3, making it entirely reasonable that they might have got together again after he stepped down - I never even gave it a thought! I think writing less-written for characters suits you even better than writing TM (because that just cries out for fluff, lol!) Would like to read some other character pairings from you too.