I absolutely loved this work of art. The character development was very well written. I was drawn in so much that it felt like was there. The descriptive detail of this work made it seem real. I would love to see more works like this. This work is better than any book I have read. I look forward to any future works from you, SkullFox. Thank you for such a brilliant work.

The nipple ring business weirded me out a bit... but Katt does seem like the kind of person to have that. It was a great story, and I really enjoyed it. It was a mostly laid back, warm fuzzy feeling kind of story that really brought out the love in Fox and friends.

But seriously...

Falco and Katt, you guys should have been together a LONG time ago.

:3

The Whole story is Great! I love how you added bits of humor in with the romance and the action was a cool bonus that I didn't see coming. the ending; Beautiful. For me the best part was the looks into the past of Fox Krystal Katt and Falco. Love the Idea of Katt x Falco and that they are engaged that was brilliant

i swear this was the best story yet i couldnt stop reading great job

woooot awesome!

yo i am fox mccloud u should make a sequel like about thier lives on sauria and stuff

Hey man. Dude ur story is awesome. I read it all in one hour. Great description on each chapter. Fox and falco r badass. Great way to show Krystal more shy and Matt more go with the flow. A little too much messing with falco with his jokes but great plotline with the vacation. So far outta all the great stories, ur story is #1. Great job. Hope u make a falcoxkatt story. It would be sweet. Dude check out my stories and tell me wat u think. Pikachumaster out

I just finished reading this story for like the 27th time, and I must say it is on he'll of a story. A similar one would be awesome

Great story up till now as the ending seemed really rushed. Great story though

awesome! i hope u keep up the good work.

"I didn't know what I was thinking. I just don't want you getting hurt…I've already lost so many people that I love…but, I don't want to loose you this way either."

Fix

This chapter felt wierd. Honestly I think this should have ended on 16, but whatever. Also, I think the mini-epilogue was pointless due to it's shortness. Still a great story.

Overall Score: 9.5/10

YAY happy ending!

u scared me 4 a sec...love the story man!

bravo, bravo man, bravo! You really gave this story a fair ending. For a moment I thought her dream would come true.

this chapter made me cry!

Ass!

lol it was good tho

Well done you! Liking the should I no should I I have to maybe I love you moment when decisions are the difference between life and death and love and sadness etc.

Great story, although I'm assuming it's over now XD. Loved reading every chapter and... well... WELL DONE! D