I just rewatched the movie, and came on to look for fics. I gotta say, this one is my favorite. I always thought edward and giselle were the dang cutest, naive couple ive ever seen, and sorta wished they ended up together (even though the movie was great) because who doesnt want to believe in true love at first sight? I loved all the problems giselle faced at the castle, and edwards naivete and eventual bravery defeating the witch. I love what u did with edwards father, it really gave him depth. I also loved pips feelings about giselle being married and all that. And i was sorta eh about aurora, but hey i usually hate girl ocs so good job with her! I love this story, u did a great and wonderful job! Keep writing!

I love this fic! this is my second time reading it :D I love the idea of Edward and Giselle :)

Sweet! considering this the only one like this!

What a lovely ending I'm so glad it all worked out for them. It was a nice tidy ending that completed the story nicely. Thank you for writing this story, I feel very lucky to have seen what it might have been like if Giselle had not been sent away from Andulasia. I enjoyed it!

I'm so glad they found Aurora and resolved everything.

She needs to know that she is loved.

~BookRose~

This has been a lovely chapter filled with dancing and party too. It was nice to see Edward and Giselle become King and Queen. I hope Aurora's okay though.

~BookRose~

Sorry it took me a while to get around to reviewing this. This made me very happy (though sad that it's over now!). It was incredibly adorable. I like how all the loose ends were resolved and everyone got a nice ending.

The one thing I would've suggested was giving some hints about the big reveal vis a vis Aurora earlier in the story. I liked the twist a lot, and had been wondering if you were going to do something to that effect, but a little exploration earlier in the story would've made it that much better. Also, I do understand if you didn't want to overload the story with OCs, but I would've been interested to see more of Stephen and Isabelle - if they'd had a small part in the story earlier. Not huge nitpicks, though, just thoughts.

I'd like to see more of your work here, when and if you have the time! I very much enjoyed following this story.

I'm happy this has been updated - and I'm also glad that, even with (seemingly) the main conflict resolved, there's still stuff left to do with this story.

Mostly I'm happy about the focus given to Nathaniel. He doesn't get enough fanfiction written about him, seriously. It's nice to see more of him here, especially in this last chapter. :)

I can't wait to read more.

This was a great chapter, and I'm so glad to see this story update! This is such a well done story that really does a good job demonstrating what life would have been like for the characters had Narissa never sent Giselle to New York. I want to know more about Aurora (love all your Disney in-jokes, by the way!). My favorite moment was Edward wanting to know who was the lucky fellow who'd be Andalasia's new king. Always wonderful to see updates on this story!

You're so close! Do you think there will be a chance of you posting chapter 15 up soon so that we can truly see Giselle and Edward's happily ever after? If you can find the time, pretty PLEASE update soon!

I enjoyed this. You give such an interesting interpretation on what could have been. Very unique and good job. :)

*after shooting Narissa and she and her characters grin down at Narissa* Night-night, crazy queen woman! Update soon!

I see you're planning a classic Disney approach. Before I read on, I'd like to point out that Disney has been attempting to create a new "generation" of classics, I'd say. First, with Shrek and an Ogre and Dragon as heroes and the prince as the villain.

Enchanted is following this path, pairing up the "peasant" and the princess. I like you're ideas, and this is a nice fic. I just don't like messing with the flow...

Poor Edward :-(

heh, I liked this line: "Queen Narissa was beautiful – in a dark, sharp sort of way."