Good Story, I mistakenly believed that the story would end with the escape, but then a new twist to deepen the mystery...thoroughly enjoyed

Loved it.

Just loved this story.

BOY HOWDY! Heath is in quite a pickle with that Elizabeth chick and her money-owing brother, Bark, or should I say barf! Poor Heath! I hope our handsome, blonde Hero will be able to get out of this mess.

Poor Nick! I know he feels guilty about what happened to his little brother. I hope everything works out for the Barkley clan. Another great chapter!

Elizabeth St. Clair's feeling a little guilty? And she should, since it was her plan to kidnap Heath. Well, let's hope that Heath will be found safe and sound before anything bad happens to the young cowboy! BOY HOWDY! This was a great chapter! Just gotta love that "Boy Howdy" phrase! AMAZING!

"OH WHAT A TANGLED WEB WE WEAVE, WHEN FIRST WE PRACTICE TO DECEIVE!" Taken from Sir Walter Scott's poem, "Marmion" written in 1808 (Canto VI, Stanza 17).

Bessie and her brother, Bart, are attempting the ultimate deception: their plot to kidnap Heath in order to get enough money from the Barkley family in order to pay off Mr. Lucain. Poor NIck! He's fallen for Bessie! Anyhoo, this is a great chapter!

I very much enjoyed your story. I'm glad that Heath made it out of Doolin's evil clutches. I was really worried there when the mine collapsed. Thanks for the thrilling read. I hope to see a new story from you soon.

You like to scare a body. I'm glad Heath survived.

Great chapter.. however I wish you had put space in between to break it apart a bit, I kept losing my place.

Excellent twist! Gosh, I hope my Nick is okay. The writing keeps getting better as the chapters progress. Keep up the good work!

Great story so far!

Been reading it straight through and its a fantastic book! Great plot well written with wonderful characterizations and lots of lovely twists. I' dying to read how it turns out! Thank you!

eek, another link that leds poor Heath to misfortune. I am really enjoying reading your ficlit so far.

Great story. Can't wait for the next update.

Hi,

I just discovered your story and read it all in one shot. I'm a big fan of Lancer and I do like crossovers, particularly with Big Valley. You're doing pretty well with that one. And you even have both Heath and Johnny in trouble! Keep going. Love it.

Liette