I really enjoyed reading this one. :) Intriguing, descriptive, emotional, great work. :)

Wow that was so awesome what a nice twist at the end, gotta adore the love/hate relationships XD

Nice work

Simply wow. this is definatly going in my fave's. as you have a sense of both atmosphere and characterization that is sorely lacking in this fandom. I hope that you continue writing, and good luck! Roll On.

Ha, this is a little like the way I imagined Ly & Rayman reacting to each other at first. A little. :D Nice story.

(What I don't get, is why you keep calling the Magician "limbless" when Betilla is just as limbless as he is? Even though she does seem to be of a different species. Oh well, not a big problem.)