| Reviews for A Whisper in the Dark |
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   holypotatogod chapter 12 . 5/27/2016 Last update was...5 years ago..um..well..uh..that's a long..time and the..cliffhanger?..huh.. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/28/2014 when are u gonna update this story...its been 3 years...finished this already... |
| Kagome Pureheart chapter 12 . 3/31/2014 Now the shocker.. Naru knows Mai sees Gene in her sleep..but when will she find out? And will this change how Naru reacts to her confession? |
| Kagome Pureheart chapter 9 . 3/31/2014 That is okay. The author did say that Mai and Naru are supposed to be a canon. Plus they are perfect for each other (and our entertainment)! Lol so is the ghost saying the truth? T-T waaah it's sappy but moe if the ghost is telling the truth...errr I don't suppose most people would have the reaction to hug and comfort a ghost, right? Lol haha yeah..I see why he didn't want his host to kiss Naru..I mean unless he really rolls that way..ummm..lol I don't think Gene would ever let Naru live that down. |
| Kagome Pureheart chapter 2 . 3/31/2014 You misspelled inconsistencies. Lol Naru as an Oompa Loompa..well maybe before Gene died..Naaaah..I mean I bet his favorite color is grey.. I still can 't move past the fact that Gene's favorite color was black. . Well, he is really chipper (almost scarily a guy version of Mai, the cheeriness part and some of the things they say ). |
| Kagome Pureheart chapter 2 . 3/31/2014 Err...Masako isn't a priestess, she is a medium and it is a bit out of character for her to slap Bou-San. You should refer to him as Takigawa, unless Mai is referring to him, as Bou-San means monk. Also, Ayako is spelled Ayako. Ayako is the Miko (haha joke on young shrine maiden..though she's younger than Bou-San by a year and way younger than Lin). I think you meant for Ayako to hit Bou-San, because it is something she would do (secretly they do this to entertain Mai). Ayako is not the Yamato Nadeshiko type..meaning she doesn't really wear kimonos. I found the first chapter to be pretty good. . You kept Mai in character for the most part, but she does say her dreams later in the manga with very little prodding. |
| Ferb O. Oche chapter 12 . 7/26/2013 This is such a promising fanfic. I do hope you continue this. |
| Eun Mi chapter 12 . 5/16/2013 Are you willing to update again? I've retread it several times now. Please update |
| Ellabellaboo124 chapter 12 . 5/11/2013 Really good, please update again soon! :) |
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/13/2013 Are you going to finish this? Cuz I love it. Really. |
| melodyann75 chapter 12 . 7/20/2012 please please update I really want to see what happens:) |
| Jaz-147 chapter 12 . 6/22/2012 pls upload this soon. |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 12 . 12/24/2011 poor Mai, one dream after the other. at least Naru is there for her, almost. now he really should be more with her as he knows that Gene is her dream-guide and also because he is after all her boyfriend, no? he asked her out on a date, but when it's going to happen? and what about his family and Madoka? is Mai going to have a peaceful rest anytime soon? MAIxNARU forever! please UPDATE really soon! ;-) please UPDATE really soon! ;-) please UPDATE really soon! ;-) |
| melodyann75 chapter 11 . 11/6/2010 i really enjoyed the story adn smiles the softer side of naru was nice i hope u update id love to see how it ends. |
| serena122189 chapter 11 . 1/14/2010 does the fanfic A Whisper in the Dark end there, nothing happens after they get back, no date occurrence with Naru, and what about the trip to the British Ilse it would make a great sequel. Just putting it out there for you |
