Reviews for 4 in 1 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know I'm 5 years late on this ff...doubt you even look at the reviews anymore. Just wanted to say, you should probably put this in crossover with DBZ or something. You have a great concept so far (up to CH 3...where I stop reading) but you have too much too quickly with 'spells' no one HP knows as cannon, Harry being an automatic bad ass and a too soon face to face with Voldemort. Maybe this fic wasn't supposed to be serious, you did use 'Moldy Warts' or some such...those are always ques to non serious authors. So maybe my review will fall on deaf ears...um...blind eyes? Hmmm? Any who, great concept, I would love to see this written seriously or more thought out. But pretty good anyway. |
![]() ![]() Anime in Harry Potter, wooow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never seen a story like this before. I'm intrigued. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry had to stop reading here. Started out okay, but after the battle I couldn't take it anymore. You should have done a crossover.. Dragon Ball, Naruto, and I guess some Manga where you got the wings idea.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That first fight completely ruined what *might* have been a serviceable story. Couldn't read any more once I hit that. Skip. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. It's not often you hear some mention the "Art of the 8 Limbs" as far as I know it's fairly obscure. By the way, I have an idea for the name of Harry's fighting style : Gorin Style or 5 Rings Style. It seems to fit with the 5 core styles of art. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Voldy really is f*cked isn't he? Now he's got a quadruple powered Potter on his hands. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They will need a separate tent, that locks, and has a silencing charm on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. I like Joshua, he seems...fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far, I love your story. It's very interesting and not like anything else I've read so far. I do have a tip for your disclaimer though. You should add that you aren't affiliated with Dragon Ball Z or any of the others considering you got a lot from them as well. :) Did a lot of people catch that? |
![]() ![]() Warning...story not done... Boring...author writing was beyond great for about the first 10 chapters or so. Then it was as if someone else started writing them. Went down hill fast after they started in on the mirror. And some chapters r just a waste of recaping from different view points... First chapters where brilliant to bad author lost his or her way. What crap after bills wedding. Goes down hill fast. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wouldn't mark this as complete. |
![]() ![]() A Unique and one of a kind story ! Great Job... Nice addition of few terms frm dragonball-z :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() That... was disappointing. The first two interludes gave insight into Ron and Hermione, helping to flesh them out as characters and showcase their unique talents and abilities. This, this was just romantic fluff. Hermione could have aced her NEWTs as a firsty and invents a new way of casting, Ron takes a few weeks to be able to beat Harry in chess even with roughly 48 years combined experience, while playing 9 other games to a draw. Ginny is just a giggling girl on a first date. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story. From the little I have read so far it looks interesting. I'm still going to read and if you rewrite it I hope to read it too. |