Holy guacamole! This was really good! Very unique plot & it definitely was really dark. Nice :)

I really, really, really, REALLY loved this story.

I wish you would have put more on about them killing pluto and beryl. how really i don't think they should have felt guilty at all. not because they were in love, but more because it was justified, self-defense... if they didn't kill beryl then they would have died. beryl let herself get overcome by darkness, usagi had that same undying love for mamoru for just as long but she never let any dark forces take over her when it never turned out to be 'happlily ever after'...

I really, really, realy loved this story of yours. Loved it, loved it, loved it!

and to me... i can understand little hotaru being upset over pluto... but pluto started it all... as a test. kind of like how King Endymion forced mamoru to break usagi's heart as a test to keep her safe... pluto forced them to kill for their loves to ensure the brightness of the future.

I really, really, really loved this story! I'm a little late catching it... so i don't know if you'll even read this review... but it's great.

how cynical and ironic

this story is brilliant.

to think all this time is was Setsuna's doing

Dude... dark... scary. You showed a side of love that noone ever sees: the obsession. Extremely powerful and well-written. Highly recommended for those who love dark, angsty fics with bittersweet ends, too bad I'm a fluff girl!

I hav to say that this story was well written. It was really intense. There were so many emotions that I felt while reading this fic. You really captured another side to Usagi and Mamoru's love. I really enjoyed reading it and I really liked the ending. I hope you keep writing!

oh no. it's just neverending isn't it? the insanity.
nicely done. listen to requiem while you're reading and it makes everything that much more intense. heh. but this really is an intense story. frustrating too. it's like why the hell wasn't anybody doing anything the first half. afraid. che. and why was setsuna trying to test them anyway? did she love mamoru? alot of nice poetic writing. excellent. :)

Wow, does your writing STINK! I mean, come on. Not only have you used a storyline that's been done a million times before, but you lack any kind of talent or quality of writing. I don't usually bother to review something this badly written, but you forced my hand. Go back and get some new ideas and do some writing classes before you send out such poor quality Fanfiction again.

::faints:: ;; Skimming through this story brings back uh. . . mixed emotions. Lol. Of course, I thought this story was INCREDIBLE when I first read it and I still think it is.

You've gone deeper than the anime with Usagi's and Mamoru's love and made it so. . . ::searches for a sufficient word and fails:: *real* and *passionate*. I used to be one of those sappy-happy-romance type readers and then I read this and this was probably my turning point. Lol, my whole outlook on Sailor Moon changed. This may sound sick, but angst and character death are so fun once in a while. o_o

Anyhoo, I love your characterizations. They're on the dot, although Usagi is less bubbly, but for good reason. You've really captured her *darker* side. I know she's supposed to be so innocent and untouched, but that's no fun. :P And I do think she is tormented on many different levels, but covers it up. When Usagi killed Beryl. . .I was totally freaked out. That entire chapter freaked me out. Heh heh, it was just very fast-paced, emotionally-draining, and chilling. ::faints again::

The exploration of Haruka's and Michiru's love as well was very inspiring. Their love is just so deep and I honestly think their love eclipses Usagi's and Mamoru's - not based on your fic, mind you, but in the anime and manga.

So, so~ I hope you haven't stopped writing. And I agree with your pen name. o_o FFN is such a butthole. First with the NC-17s, now names and stuff. Blah.

I'm at a lost as to what to think of this ending. It may just be too bitter sweet for my taste, but the story is great non the less. Hope you keep writing.

_ A good chapter. I'm sad that Setsuna died, and I still don't quite get what's wrong with Minako. Some parts were a bit confusing, so it was kind of hard to figure it out. It was a bit of an open ending, which I both like and don't like. Good story.

Holy shit! This was the best story I have ever read. I can't believe it's finally over. It's just so wonderful! Wow!

thank you so much for finishing the tale. quite a disturbing but refreshing take on love. are you going to write more sailor moon stories? best of luck on your future endeavors. THANKS!

Good ending for a great story!

I really enjoyed this story... It's so deep and emotional and O_O Please don't give up writing! _

wow ; long wait there, but put the next one out soon _