| Reviews for Rare, Dangerous, and Unusual |
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Guest chapter 12 . 6/30 Thank you for the story, but I wish there was at least something more to Snape apart from being dangerous and inducing lust. There is not even a hint of development of feelings. He continually enjoys hurting her and making her uncomfortable and for some reason instead doing something about it she just continues to take it .At least once would be nice, not hysteric screaming, but some way to make him regret hurting her or at least to realise that continuing this way could lead to loosing her. There actually is no reason apart from lust and later the need for help for her to tolerate him. I mean, she says "you know how I feel", but there was no transition to feelings other than lust. And he suddenly realises that he enjoys her lusting after him and wants her too and since she already knows that he'll continue to hurt her, really, why not? I just wish Hermione was at least a bit stronger here and not just allowed him to have fun hurting her all the time. Hermione says something about him being mysterious, but here he is not mysterious at all. He does what he wants and enjoys hurting people in the process and plans to continue. I continued to read in the hope of finding something more to them and to the relationship, but unfortunately to no avail. But at the same time the writing is good and the plot (minus mentioned above) is nice. |
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 12 . 3/7 Cute and interesting short story |
erm31323 chapter 12 . 2/29 I really enjoyed this, Severus and Hermione were so wonderfully in character. Loved the premise and how Flourish got what he deserved. |
Aigo Snape chapter 12 . 10/28/2018 -wow- |
robituputup chapter 12 . 10/4/2018 It was nice, funny, and well written. I liked your Severus more than your Hermione, but in my opinion they both were quite in-character ;) Thank you for the nice reading piece! |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/2/2018 Very good read. Thank you for sharing. |
YourVeryOwnRandomCatLady chapter 12 . 3/5/2018 what a new way for them to find eachother! I really enjoyed it! Thank you for writing and sharing! |
GuLaLi561 chapter 12 . 11/27/2017 Ahh great ending! |
Kittenshift17 chapter 12 . 3/14/2017 Great story with a great ending. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for writing! |
Kittenshift17 chapter 11 . 3/14/2017 You can't leave me on a cliffhanger like that! |
Kittenshift17 chapter 10 . 3/14/2017 That was brilliant |
Kittenshift17 chapter 9 . 3/14/2017 Well, I'm glad they figured it out. All of it. |
Kittenshift17 chapter 8 . 3/14/2017 Yeah, having Snape help here will smoke the other guy for sure. Great chapter. The sexual tension is fabulous. xx-Kitten |
Kittenshift17 chapter 7 . 3/14/2017 Bloody brilliant. I love how you captured the awkwardness as well as the heat ) |
Kittenshift17 chapter 6 . 3/14/2017 That utter arse! But yay for the agreement to sex. This story is bloody brilliant. |