Reviews for Expiration Date
Norv chapter 5 . 6/9
mon personnage préféré de Severus dans une histoire palpitante et pleine d'humour un régal merci pour ce bon moment j'attends la suite avec impatience
SB chapter 6 . 5/16
This is such an awesome story. I love so many things about it. I am glad that the people who were so long overlooked and treated poorly are starting to work together for change.

I hope Molly isn't successful. That poor family!
Norv chapter 6 . 4/23
génial, merci pour ce bon moment d'évasion
KruRid chapter 6 . 4/12
Snape is so cute when he panicked for nothing hahahahaha. I understand why Hermione laughed too because I simply laughed my ass out too. I hope that you'll continue this and poor Dumbledore needs to get the fuck out of Harry and Severus' life.
Das Legio chapter 6 . 3/6
I knew it seemed familiar. And again, wow. Long update time.
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 6 . 3/1
What will happen next time
00 chapter 6 . 2/7
Update. Please.
Jen chapter 6 . 1/9
We need more!
Intrigue19 chapter 6 . 1/5
Oh no! Why do people feel like they need to interfere with others' lives without seeing if everything is all right.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/19/2019
Targeting seniors is predatory.
Corala chapter 6 . 10/22/2019
Good God hope that they do not get him
ej-83 chapter 5 . 10/2/2019
update soon.. am curious on whether ron, hermione, harry n neville will support on the weasleys taking the baby away from his parents or not.. never liked the adult weasleys that much so am hoping that harry n neville will not let them take the kid away
Vkw10 chapter 6 . 9/13/2019
Excellent! I love Snape's reaction to "muggle magic" and his i won't let you young idiots kill yourselves gruffness. I also enjoy seeing Albus squirm as he realizes he's been a callous jerk.
guest chapter 6 . 9/11/2019
Excellent so far! Characterization, especially of Snape and the kids, is right on. I don't believe in a redeemable Dumbledore, but we'll see.

Sorry to see that Arthur is part of the kidnap attempt but wouldn't exactly be shocked if Molly put his name on it without his knowledge. I do find her greatest excesses to be more fanon than canon, but it's true that she, Ron, and her birth family showed typical pureblood attitudes toward Sebastian in Book 1. Arthur's fascination with Muggles could certainly be interpreted as being in the spirit of observing interesting animals.

Please make your fic's events leading up to the end of the war explicit. They cannot have been canon starting from before the end of HBP since AD is still alive. What happened that AD and SS lived but HP knows he was to be sacrificed?

Interesting that only one reviewer identified the "Muggle potion" that was the homeopathic "medicine." I too would ~love~ to see you show SS's reaction to the idea.
LightningFuryStrike13 chapter 6 . 9/10/2019
Molly!

and no Michael just cuase it's muggle just cause it does have magic muggle remedies if taken wrong can still make you VERY sick.
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