Beautiful Story! It’s interesting, well-written and stayed quite true to character. I loved it!

LOVED THIS STORY! 3 3 :D

Oh my! I laughed so hard! It was so easy to picture it all. Great job!

I have never been so devastated about a book ending before, your story was one of the bast Bleach fanfictions I have ever read.

YASSS the perfect ending for the perfect story 3

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! You're such a good writer and I hope you have a wonderful day, because this story certainly made my day better :)

My only real problem content wise thus far is yes, Yachiru is a child, but she's not stupid enough to run right at an arrancar. She's been around battle and violence her whole life, after all. Otherwise it's an entertaining story. Thank you for sharing.

Has you only arranged four or five characters for your fiction?

I got to say could have seen her with Byakuya. They seemed to get along. I feel that Hisana ruined him for all the rest. X_x

I just wanted you to know this is the first time a fanfiction has ever moved me to tears. I love this fanfic, and Akina is a fantastic character.

This story was nice. I like the way you write it and the story line was pretty good.

The ending was a bit too abrupt and rush in my opinion. The story was really great though. :)

OMG that was totally awesome n so sweet lol great job :3

Ahhhh I want more! This was such a good story!

I really, really enjoyed this story. It was pretty amazing. I love the main character, the storyline, the couples. I love everything about it. I think you did an amazing job with Akina. She fit in so well it was almost as if she were a true character of Bleach. Great job. :)

aww I wish you didn't end it there
you could have expanded it so much more
love it and hope for a sequel