Great MI6 or SAS story. If this is supposed to be some type of cross over with the story of James Bond 007 could you have a code name for Ron like Bond also have him be a great ladies man and a gentlemen. I am not sure if that is your intent but if it is I would love to see Ron be almost like James Bond. Intent or not great story keep it up.

interesting. will ron ever forgive kim?

A nice spin you've put on this with Ron and Kim.

I think Kim was a bit OOC with her deeds, but not with her attitudes and thoughts that lead to it in the first chapter.

The second chapter was perfect.

Are you updating soon?

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Mike.

Hey I loved your Coming home series because you actually put Ron with other people besides Kim (why, I don't know but I hate that pairing) but I like your OC and I also like how Ron is almost a James Bond. I hope you update this story and Coming Home 2 as well I'll be keeping an eye on them.

OK 73, You made Kim out to look like a b* in the first chapter. Then in the second one a repenting one. I'm sure that Du knows all about his partner's life and it shouldn't bother him. So is Rufus gonna slam the crap outta Ron to wake him up or is Kim gonna go nuts and bite a bullet.

So the drama,

Larry (Sentinel 103)

thanks to you i hate kim now... pat yourself on the back!

Cool ch! Who the GJ agent that Ron is going to meet? cant' more ch!

I know this is gonna be a serious story but it'd be sweet and fun if ron got to work with the greats like:

007 James Bond

Johnny English

Austin Powers

Hellsing organization.

Ron in her majesty's secret service. Love it! UASAP.

great start to a story keep it up

Good start and nice plot. A little fast paced though, more interaction with the characters and dialog should help. Waiting for the next chapter. :)

I like it. It has a good plot so far. Thou I have a feeling that the GJ agent will be Kim or Will Du. More then likely it will be Kim. Ether way it should be good. The research was stolen by Drakken and Shego. LATER

't wait for the next chapter.

Interesting first chapter. Can't wait to see what else 6 years has done with the rest of the KP cast.

great story, can't wait to see how it goes on, but what is it? a kind of 007 and Kim Possible crossover? aniway update