Oookkk... That was a bit dramatic and a bit violent. But who cares?:)

UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! IT'S REALLY GOOD.

Quite nice and interesting. I like your story, and I'll be waiting for updates. Please update soon! _

yeah i've had girls do that too. i'm looking forward to the next chapter

Well, I don't really like Edwin, or Winry in general, but this story is pretty good, especially for its connection to "Outcast". I'm waiting impatiently for an update!

update now ... i mean it

Ah, refreshing to read FMA again. I took such a long break, and I missed chapters 4 & 5, until now. Please update soon~!

-Love For You-

nice

i like that fact that you had her yell at her. in the manga (or was it the anime?) roes got mad at him for something or another and started yelling at him so i can see her doing something like that. well pleas update soon.

I really liked it!

Fairly interesting, if the chapters are on the short side. Keep it up!

hm they sure seem to end up together a lot. :) such a well-planned coincidence huh? *inner voice: that was an oxymoron you idiot! BONK!* ow... yea i know! *pouts*

:) update soon okay? this is amusing

agh! i hate rose!

why would you be mean to Ed? why? it's Ed! Ed's amazzling!

please update, i love this story, it's really good

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yes an update! im really enjoying this story. i wonder what is wrong with ed he seemed so mad. did something happen to al? no tht would be devestating or did someone actuall call hime short. anywas update soon. oh and i fot got to say something in my review of connections. i like howyou had the storyes start at different times. that is really cool. i alos like how oyur school is set up. is it hard to keep up with the schoolwork?

Oh, its getting interesting! MWHAHAHA! *chokes and falls over*

Anyways, I wanted to know if lust was going to be in this story. Sorry if I over looked her soem where, but I don't THINK I saw her.

P.S. PLEASE Update!