Sexy and hot! I love it!

Do you happen to write initials for character names first and then write their actual names after you're finished writing?

Because if you do then i thought i was the only one that does that

3 Mmm, sexy boys. That ending though, poor Sanji! U Thanks for sharing your writing, it's pretty good!

awesome story i loved it !

That was a very sexy story, wish there was more XD

damn nice :3 thank you :333

The first ZS lemon that I read in another language and I totally loved! You did a great job and I can totally see those things happening xD

And the end was just sooo One Piece! It reminds me of a lot of doujinshis who are lovely! [and funny xD]

The fanfic is totally on my favorites now /o/~

I loved it. you had everyone in charter and you really couldn't tell that English isn't your main.

not bad, not bad. Although you did misspell Zoro's name (as Zorro) other than that, I have no qualms about grammar errors, the rest is good.

It really was quite hot too!

I really love this. Thank you soo much.

I saw some repetitive errors involving different time tenses together (did I even say that right? XD, but I loved the story.

I thought it was very realistic. They didn't get carried away with screwing each other. Sanji still had his doubts about having sex with Zoro, and didn't get turn into a lust uke.

Sorry if I sound harsh. I really do like your story, but I have a hard time explaining what I think in a clear way. Write more! :D

the essence of this story is great. it deservrs a continuation.

HAHAHAHAHHAHA

I LOVE IT!

Aww Zoro is been nice... and profiting...

Hahahaha Nami is fine and Usopp is in shock LOVE IT!

*try to imagine the scene...kya drool*

gd _

Ignore flames. ;P The lack of commas didn't throw me off at all and it was well written despite what the flamers say.