i thought u were writing something good then i find it's nothing but garbage

This story had more plot holes then dbz series and movies combined

nice!

Hehe... Is it cool if I have a little laugh at you over this? _ How long ago was this? hehe.

U

SUCK!

bullshit the pigs could have kicked him out of the mall at the most cause he didnt do shit so you plot makes no sense

I am VERY VERY glad you gave up this fic for the one and only Ranma. Had it been anything else I woulda been pissed cuz this is pretty damn good. But... NO WAY IN HELL DBZ COULD EVER BEAT RANMA. Ranma's the best. Good choice. Don't really know wheel of time but i heard good things about it so it's probly better than dbz too. Anyway, the fic was good. Ranma is better. I'll read the Ranma fic now... lata.

LOOSER!

AND TO THINK I FINALLY FIND THAT ITS BEEN UPDATED AND THIS HAPPENS! AGAIN!

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Wonder what the world will come to if gohan went on a rampage...hint hint (i think i spelt it right...if i didnt say ramp age) lol i am dumb

you disowned this story! but it was soo good! I still think you should continue it.

I'm sorry, but with Bulma dead, and Vegeta gonna die...you've lost half of your fans there, hun. I suggest that you take different actions people have to complete in this story, if you want somebody to continue it. I might have taken it if you didn't have any requirements (and the fact that I'm not so into DBZ or HP anymore...), but with those reqirements, you've lost half of the people who used to love this story...and now that you want to find a new author, you've lost 1/2 of those who were left. So, I guess I'm agreeing with the other people before me in saying (and this is not a flame) take this story down, it's got no hope left.

Sorry,

KRG

Hey.. this is a cool story... - I read parts of it awhile ago... (not sure if I ever reviewed.. I try to review... but sometimes when I'm not in that great of a mood or something I won't)... hmm... Its like i said a cool story.. and its not like I'd MIND it to be continued.. but.. having Bulma die... and then have Vegeta die... thats asking a lot.. I wish you luck in finding someone who will continue it.. I have been wanting to write a DBZ fic (like I have time.. I have enough trouble with the 2 I'm doing now - hehe they're updated like once every 2 or more months - ;) I used to be better than that - lol one a day with my first fanfic ) oh well... Sorry that people don't seem to want to have anything more to do with this fanfic.. it was a cool idea.. just.. it went a LITTLE far with Bulma dying and not being able to be brought back.. and then Vegeta dying.. and personally I think his teenage years should be of Goku WANTING to come back ;) ) lol course.. I like everyone to be happy :) anyway... I gotta go... good luck finding an author! I'm sure someone will want to continue it eventually ) well GOOD JOB! and sorry that you grew sick of DBZ! ) lol I grew sick of Harry Potter.. though I'm still writing fanfictions for it... well.. its not that I don't LIKE Harry Potter anymore.. I'm just not obsessed like I used to be ) :) well once again GOOD LUCK! :) and have fun writing that crossover ;) ) - BUT you can always reconsider trying to pass this off to someone else! :)

No one's going to want to finish your dirty work for you- if you're too lazy to finish it (or "sick of DBZ in general", in your case) then just take it down.

i like bulma alive and didn't really like your story to begin with

no fair, i l;ike the story; i would like to continue the story !