Awesomely creative piece, very detailed.. Alice must've really despised her Nanny.. :)

Oh wow. This was amazing ;D

Wow, what an adorable child she is! I would just hug her!

Hehe, yes it did sone perfectly British. Not to nit-pick, but Alice's last name in the game is Liddel, like her real-life counterpart. Other than that, I enjoyed it very much. It was well done and I think you had a interesting notion for a AU.

Good Job!

Hey! I get it! I like how you described the way Alice was good with jacks and cards, and was good at playing croquet and chess. Very clever.