this story is very cute...Vexen finally love marlu ?

Excuse me, But this story is magnificent and I'm quite saddened that it hasn't been updated lately, please update!

I think that you should continue this story. I really hope that you will, because I am enjoying this. I especially love the failed attempts at Marluxia's 'whooing'. It is very funny.

I've definatley fallen in love with this story it's hilarous plz continue

Please update soon and i'll be your bestest best friend

where are you? This story rocks so don't leave it incomplete...or else...

Luxord is as much of an as I remember him to be, and Demyx is still adorable.

F- you win.

Poor Roxas, stuck with those two idiots. LOL. I'm so glad you posted another chapter, I though you weren't going to continue.

This is excellent so far. I can't wait to read more. I'm an aspiring manga illustrator myself. I think it's cool to read the would of others in the field of stoytelling

WTF

AN UPDATE.

COMMENCING NOW WITH THE DANCING I AM OF JOY.

AND SINGING.

LUXORD USES ANTLERS IN ALL OF HIS DECORATING~

ilu, and glad to have you back on this story, it really is a gem, and I hope this little spurt means your feeling better. But don't let this story get in the way of your original work, okay? *stern look*

Seriously, for such a short chapter, you got a lot done. You've introduced two new characters, Demyx especially showing a nice touch of personality done just right (casual, a little up for friendly banter, with his intelligence, which I assume is a parallel to his power in KH, hidden and hinted at but not shoved down our throats with the fact) with a subtly and balance that most writers cannot grasp let alone convey with an entire fic, and you've set up some crunchy plot.

And he knows about clouds. :D

Luxy... you're so mean! I can safely assume he;s the Gaston of this story... is Demyx the Nabul? (or whatever the creepy little guy's name is) I love how sly you made Demyx at the end )

XD THIS STORY IS PURE AND AMAZING AWESOMENESS!

It's funny and Marluxia is a magnificent bastard and Vexen is amazingly snarky and I just LOVE LOVE LOVE all the "Beauty and the Beast" references. ("Beauty and the Beast" is one of my favorite fairy tales of all time. It's so sweet. ) AND ROXAS IS A KITTY! AW! :3 Can I have him?

You WIN for this story. Just WIN for the amazing plot and the banter between Mar-Mar and Vexen. Please update again soon! (I'm kicking you, kickkickkick...lol)

~LWD~

You're back? Hell yes! I've been waiting for this story to continue (said the hypocrite... *cough*)!

Anyway! I love how you've portrayed Demyx. After everything the fangirls do to him, he deserves to be a little bad-arse. Well done.

In short about this chapter: OM NOM NOM!

YAY! UPDATE! Thank you! I look forward to the new chapter. And I like that you made Xion the adopted child it works for those two guys for some reason... (humm) Anywho keep it up!

And thanks for the compliment hun _