Great stories deserve reviews. Consider this a positive review for awesomeness :D

I know this is random and I'm not saying anything bad cause I already like where the story is going and also you wrote it a along time ago. But Edward didn't have a coat on when he entered the gate (which you mentioned) at the end of the first anime so he should not have had one on when he ended up on the Loveless world and he also wasn't wearing old fashion trousers, he was wearing leather pants.
I'm just saiyen
I like that he has golden ears though, because he's awesome xD

You have to keep writing this!

I won't be able to go on if you stop! GAH!

Dude. I love you.

I didn't think there'd be a crossover with this. I didn't think I'd like it.

It's epic! And so far, I've already laughed like, 3 times! 3

mind blown. I...don't even, what is this O_O oh my goodness. this was a fantastic fic. i am so glad this exists my favorite part...was mustang hammered the first time. oh. my. god. sooo funny i had literal tears in my eyes. you are wonderful. truly.

for some reson i just can't sse Roy singing softly

the part at the end shocked me, but i didn't read anything about this stoy at all. i just picked it out of the blue.

"You have Kitty ears, too!" GOD! I laughed so hard at that point! My mom had to come in and tell me to quiet down I was so loud!

Hah, of course Al would be pleased about waking up with kitty-ears XD

Just read this all in one go, and (we) love it! Please update soon, (we're) seriously enjoying this.

~Zaskaea & Feezles

As much as I hate stories that incorporate the Red King and White Queen, everything else in this story is pretty cute. When it isn't being utterly terrifying.

But yay, Al's awake!

amazing! i love it that ed got al back. XD

good job i love this story :D

u r amazing

Soubi glanced in Ed's direction, then turned back to Roy. "I see you've been putting those Sentouki combat strategies you read about to good use, Colonel Mustang."

Roy smirked, but it was Ed who answered. "Nah, this has nothing to do with those dusty books. He does this all the time back home. He has the entire army corps wrapped around his little finger; it's disgusting. People just listen to him when he talks. And if they don't, he yells at them until they do listen. He's the only person I know who can keep shouting at you for 15 minutes straight without breaking his stride or letting you get a word in edgewise. It's much less about his skills as a Fighter and much more about the fact that he's a royal bastard who wont take no for an answer."

I so agree with this, and i loved the line in the first couple chapters where roy was like Ed is my dog, not the other way around.' your hilarious and your fic is soon.

Oh... XD

Amusing.

Very amusing.