I'm amazed at your level of creativity...you must have a very vivid imagination to dream up some of these ideas. However, I find you long-winded. There is such a thing as being too descriptive...especially when the descriptions become redundant. Also, your spelling and grammar errors are distracting. Maybe try looking up a word when you're unsure of its spelling. Grammar, I'll admit, is a bit more challenging; you'll do well with more study and practice. At the very least, get a friend (who is obviously fond of language arts) to proof-read for you. Minus these speed bumps, I'd say you've got yourself an overall smooth ride...one that takes its passengers on a journey full of creativity and adventure. "Write" on!

When will you update? This story was actually good. Plz update it it's sounding good.

Two words totally awesome story really keep it up this chapter was great as well.

Lost of detail in the story great job this is an awesome story keep it up.

Not bad so far. Your grammar has improved a lot. :) Keep up the good work.

Dude, this is just getting better by the second. Will fighting against Spiderman in New York. Now thats awesome. Seriously, this hole series rocks my world. I also cant wait to see what happened to Rose after she gained her hunter powers. And, of cource, the main event, battle for Roses home city in Ohio. Anyway, pure awesomeness and update soon.

Two words: ultimate awesomeness! Seriously, this is one of the best fics Ive ever read. Your writing may not be perfect yet (its still beter then mine though) but your ideas awesome as well as realisation of that idea wich is equally important. And sorry I cant offer you any constructive critisicsm, but I suck as a writer. Anyway, I cant wait for war to begun. Itll be especially cool to see high A-rank demons vs. high A-rank angels, gods or whoevers in the underworld army, battles with them using all their super-powerfull powers. And also, is Viscons going to be destryed becouse it seems unlikely to me that after full-scale, open war between hevean and hell, that town stayes untouched. In my opinion, it would most likely be turned into dust. Anyway, awesome story and PLEASE X10 update soon.