if there is more to this story...perhaps a continuing saga of sorts...it would be great...otherwise...wonderful!

This was a great story and I got to learn something as well as be entertained! I know you posted this a long time ago, but... it's still being read!

Very epic tale dude.

I've only a few minutes before I run, but this story is fantastic! You've managed to give these guys (whom I adore, for how can a person resist?) solid personalities and backstories without detracting from the absurdities and hilarity that are shown in the show. I'm sure you are busy busy but if you ever delve into this world more I will wait with baited breath. Oh, and the Manager has always been my favorite. Thanks for the ending bit about him.

This was really good. The dream sequences were beautifully written. The symbolism was amazing. The plot was creative. It was like reading an actual off-the-shelf book. You should write more Metalocalypse fan fiction! I would really enjoy it. :)

Dude. This was awesome.

Awesomer than the awesomest awesome, times infinity.

I LOVES YOU.

This was really amazing, I loved the metaphors you weaved into each person's dream. And the way you combined music and alchemy in the story was flawless and absorbing! (Not only that, but educational-I do love to be entertained as I'm schooled.) I found this a really enjoyable read.

Actually, I wouldn't be surprised if Charles used to be part of the Tribunal. I mean, he's got all his fighting skills, all his tactics, and he knows things...things that he's not supposed to know.

I think your onto something there...

I've got to go read the next chapter. I'd like to see this comic you drew. Do you have Deviantart?

To the next chapter.

Oh wow. This story is really intriguing...I've got to read the next chapter at once!

I love the way you write descriptive, but not so much that you get extremely bored while reading it. I can't wait to see what happens next.

(I'm getting a science lesson while reading about Dethklok. Sweet.)