Four for four. Another great story. I don't think it needed an M rating though.

You've really got the personalities down well and it comes out in the writing you do perfectly.

I hate to have the first review be a nitpick (and with such a nitpick that I might as well have "Geek" permanently tattooed on my forehead)... But you have Daniel asking for Budge at the end of this, but, according to the original Stargate movie, Daniel doesn't like Budge. In it he says "I don't know why they keep reprinting his [Budge's] books."

Anywho... other than Budge, I liked it :]