Nice to see one of the rare Ranma/Azusa fics. It was obvious (to me at least) that you meant Azusa from the start, so if you were going for a surprise ending, it didn't work perfectly. I'm looking forward to seeing just how a relationship between the two develops though. She's an interesting character we rarely see and it's good to see a Ranma who doesn't seem to love or completely hate a Tendo and acknowledging the problems.

Aw...I was kinda hoping for Kasumi...oh well, this is still good!

Man...

I screwed up my own review...

Normally i mess up my friends...

I ment to say (or i will)...

But i forgot the or...

WAh!

Oddly, enough I feel that i should blame this upon the letter A...

Like in Akane...

Get it, A, like in a Akane

Man i can't believe i just wasted your and my time on this...

Amazing, original, and first time i have ever seen this pairing... Keep up the good work i will...

Wait, give me a minute...

Hey, stop rushing me...

Hey!

I know I'll sick Akane on you...

BwaHaHaHA

I never thought I'd ever find a story with Azusa. I thought it was something someone would have to completely rewrite the character to accomplish, but somehow you're done it. I actually really really like what you have here. Good job!

Nice story hope to read more of it it I had fun reading it!

This is just wrong... it still doesn't explain how Ranma fell in love with her and Ranma wouldn't do any of those things you made him do. It just doesn't seem Ranmanish.

Hehehehe! Muahahahahaha! This is great.

Hm... I think the time when Ranma 'beat' Shampoo as a guy when she tried to kill Akane shouldn't even count. I don't think he even touched her that time when it happened, and she 'accidentally' beat herself while charging at the two of them, and something happened that resulted in Shampoo knocking herself out with one of her own bonboris without Ranma even getting a chance to lay a finger on her, and as soon as she woke she claims boy type Ranma was now her husband because he 'beat' her.

You don't like Akane i guess LOL

Anyway, nice story, the second part is kind of fun

continue (even if I'm a fan of RanmaXAkane LOL)

Yes you have. You have created a monster that is going to assist in the ripping off of Nerima's food and merchandise.

So Asuna knows that Ranma has a cursed form, hu? Where did she learn about it? From your description here to her reactions (which was none), she knew about it. I think it would have been hard to tell at the Charlotte Cup for her, so it must have been some other time, right?

Question: Is Ranma going to dress up in girl form at times when he goes out with Asuna? Not that I would mind, mind you. In fact, i encourage it. Let Ranma explore 'her' feminine side. Maybe a scene or two where they are discussing different bra types, panties, dresses, make-up, shoes, and the sort. (Though you may have to change the rating from 'T' to 'K ' for that.)

Lookin' forward to your next chapter.

He has indeed created a most vile monster... I like it!

Ranma will never be free again!

::foflmao once more::

Hm, interesting story. I can't wait to see Asuna's story behind herself. I liked how the layout is done too. Though, I think you overlooked Nabiki, Kodachi, Kuno, Kasumi, and Nodoka. Maybe even the baka-duo, hentai-extreme, and tenticrule-minator. Oh yeah, almost forgot the male-kunoichi's, and the lowly man-servent.

Lookin' forward to the next one.

woah! shocking, azusa? why her? well anyway its ur story and i want to find out where this is heading to...