The whole thing felt a bit rushed. I think Shizuru's feelings would've been more emphasized if you had written about the three days Natsuki wasn't with her. But I really liked the end. It's nice to know Shizuru is slowly overcoming her fears, and Natsuki's staying for good.

Very bittersweet. The part where Shizuru agrees to believe in Natsuki (near the end) felt a tiny bit rushed to me. But overall, it was good.

I'm so glad that they get to have their happiness.

Such an fascinating writing! I love this story very much, thank you a lot for the work The love between ShizNat is like dripping from every sentence without being explicit.

Simply great work, I'm just sad that it's not getting any longer :(

So cute! Natsuki is easy to tease :P

oh ho ho... Are you really the Shizuru of the story or the Natsuki? Never mind that.

I'm glad to read another fic from Shizuru's pov. I've always thought it's more difficult to do.

I enjoyed it. Good job

did they leave each other before ?

thanks for updating

it worked out in the end - happy -

what a sweet ending

complete already? o_O

well, its was kinda short but i still like it

hope more ideas come to you ]

Glad that finally Natsuki could decide the right thing...Can't wait to see them date so please update soon.

By the way Natsuki in this chapter...she's confindent than usual..I like it

see two chapters isnt that scary :P keep up the good work im in the process of writing my first one shot so i hope it turns out nearly as good as yours do

Fluffly and angsty.

I like it.

~ManiazAzn

ahh...such a sweet ending... i'm just wondering why she had to wear a dress...oh well...

Ahh... nothing like a good fluff to warm up the mornings. :P

I like a Natsuki who is confident and sure of her choice. :)

Oh god too cute. I love it, perfect.