Reviews for Super Smash Bros, The Evangelion Wars
NoXVZhuusox chapter 110 . 7/29/2017
Just to be clear. This is cancelled right?
Half-beastdragonsoul2013 chapter 110 . 8/4/2014
Finally! Two days of non-stop reading is over.
Half-beastdragonsoul2013 chapter 86 . 8/4/2014
All of the timid characters in this fic reminds me of Shinji-kun. Especially Lucas and Luigi.
Half-beastdragonsoul2013 chapter 6 . 8/3/2014
I like THIS multiverse fic!
Alfa290 chapter 110 . 6/24/2014
What did I just read?
Dracodragonheart chapter 110 . 10/24/2013
YOU MUST FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE AND MAKE ASUKA A TRAITOR
Dracodragonheart chapter 19 . 9/5/2013
Only chapter 19 and a few minutes to know pit and shinji watches him die that is so not fair
Dracodragonheart chapter 5 . 9/2/2013
This story reminds me of the Last Battle from the chronicles of Narnia
All characters in a possible final battle for a dying planet
Alex Warlorn chapter 110 . 8/19/2012
CONRINUED! YIPPPIEEEEEE! YAHOOO!

: :D :D :D :D

SMILE SMILE SMILE!

HUG!

"Whaaaah, this is scary," Popo shouted.

"This isn't fun anymore," Nana agreed. "I wanna go home."

Makes you wonder what the twins ARE going to do with themselves, or rather, who can take care of them, when the dust settles. They sure helped when they took on Ripley. I think it's a safe bet they haven't been told they have no home to return to.

Marx chose that exact moment to fire a broad, glowing beam out of his mouth. Shinji managed to dodge the attack at the last second. The occupants of the Halberd bridge stumbled when the whole ship started shaking.

So . .. did it hit the Halberd I take it?

And I'm not helpless, I am the princess of Hyrule!"

So she's accepted her role I see.

the exact same plague Keel Lorenz had unleashed on so many other worlds.

I knew Asuka knew about the genocide caused by the X-parasites, (I think) and Shinji's mother might have told them about commander Keel Lorenz's betrayal. BUt when did the phazon begin being used en mass?

"What is this?" Dark Rei growled. „What are they doing to my wonderful weapon of destruction?"

Pathetic. She wants to be the only Rei in existence and is willing to mass murder to do it, and has become just another cliche bad guy who loves death and violence.

On Zoness, both inhabitants and military personnel were in an uproar. The Leviathan was coming closer and closer, and even though it had yet to enter the planet's atmosphere, it's sheer size was clearly visible for everyone, not just on computer screens.

When did it enter Zoneness' visual and scanner range?

Don't forget, Rei-GP grew herself to the size of an Evangelion and is a living fleet carrier, if they were willing to trust her, she might be able to help.

YOu cover a lot of bases here, a lot. This chapter feels like you cut short of the main event. I was looking forward to seeing what the giants can do.

This of course won't destroy the leviathan, just send it back into space, but that a whole lot better than the last of Lylat being turned into another giant phazon farm.

At least everyone will be able to trade notes once the dust settles.

I wonder where Iblis Blaze is right now and what she intends to do.

And while the endless ex machinas and plot devices are pretty much COMPLETELY IN SPIRIT of the this story, and Smash Brothers, I hope that the next chapter wraps up the emerald hunt on Mobius. And what these different groups of heroes recruited by Celebi are supposed to be as their objectives.

THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!
Cylon One chapter 110 . 8/19/2012
What a fantastic telling of what went on in this current chapter of one of the greatest adventures in the universe.

I very much enjoyed it and may I never tire of Super Smash Bros, The Evangelion Wars.

Which I never will.

What goes on in this with Shinji and the others in the world of Super Smash Brothers is just too cool so far and I continue to believe it will continue to be so.
AYH chapter 109 . 6/7/2012
Great to see this continued. It's nice that Pit, Lemmy, and Fuyutsuki work together to escape.

One thing though, Lemmy mentioned that he tried to entertain the prisoners in those dark hours, yet the only other time he was shown he was crying. Maybe a scene of him trying to cheer up the souls in the Underworld would be good to show why a lot of the prisoners decided to listen to him and his speech.

Also, it seemed that his speech was well timed. I'm guessing that it was Fuyutsuki that suggested it to him? Maybe you could clarify that, showing that Fuyutsuki is a great planner, Lemmy is a good leader, and Pit is a great fighter, giving each a moment their moment to shine.

Overall though it's great and I'm glad to see Ashley again and the rest again.
Alex Warlorn chapter 109 . 6/4/2012
New episode of Evangelion Wars? (faints)

What's even more wrong is why Pit was sent to the underworld instead of straight back to his goddess like normally happens when he dies. The rules of the universe had gone out the window. It's gonna take a VERY LONG TIME for the gods to slowly repair this mess.

Nice. But Thanatos is green, not purple.

Thanatos may be Medusa's loyal servant (or at least the loyal servant of whoever is the current lord of the Underworld) but he also a total goof ball.

That's the thing about the evil after life even in fantasy settings, no matter how much of a big shot you were while alive, you're nothing to the big shots already in charge in the evil version of the here after.

"This isn't what you imagined when you accepted the Subspace Army's offer to work for them… right, Ashley?"

And I doubt it's what she expected her afterlife to be like after she began working directly for the people running the place while still alive. Instead of going to The Underwhere (the Mushroom world neither world) she instead ends up in the afterlife of the subspace army.

, for some reason I have yet to understand.

That's how love works.

that the forces of evil considered you a threat.

that the forces of good considered you a threat.

"Remember my words, Ashley," Pit said. "I've seen a lot of evil in my battles, and you are not evil."

Have you been reading my fanfic with Diamond Tiara?

"And given some time, I will become a much more powerful demon."

At least she has all eternity to climb the ladder. And every other minor fiend in the underworld army is thinking the exact same thing.

Interesting debates Shinji has with the fallen villains. Of course this being Medusa (and Hade's) underworld, it's the LEAST fair afterlife around, innocent and guilty alike being the underworld army's torture toys for entertain value or grunts.

Sadly the vice-commander is right, and he actually has better clarity than Ashley. Both are dead and both MADE their choices, at least the vice-commander accepts them.

Phosphora? What's one of the goddess of nature's minions doing here? Viridi's not -insane- enough to trust Medusa in the slightest.

Phosphora, goddess of thunder,

Heh, he keeps getting that wrong, it's lightning, not thunder Pit, get it right. (in game he keeps calling her goddess of thunder when her proper title is lightning).

"Yup," Phosphora grinned. "The Viridi Palm.

The little goddess of nature's ego knows no bounds!

So I'm guessing the medusa in subspace is the real deal rather than the emulation Hades created.

a natural leader, born into a family of leaders."

Sending pathetic weaklings to their doom with no hope of winning and making it sound like the best idea ever? Yep. Sounds like typical koopa stratagy to me. Lemmy has it made. This'll be easy.

Lemmy's laying it on thick, guess he did learn a thing or two from his father.

I imagine Bowser is gonna be even more ticked when he learns his son's spirit wasn't even allowed to enter the Underwhere.

Ironically, Hades had the BETTER idea of using souls as raw material for underworld monsters, Medusa however likely due to her loathing o Hades mostly ditched this idea . . and she could very well pay dearly for it.

I never expected to see another chapter from this story again.

The slaves have no chance of winning, but they are giving Pit the perfect chance to Escape, and Lemmy was the ONLY logical choice to do this. The Koopa's charisma for getting grunts to suicidally attack in sheer numbers is what they do best.

Viridi, "We're actually accepting those cyborg zombies as a species?"

"You're out voted Virdi."

"...Fine! Just remember when I tell you so, I told you so!"

"Noted. Shouldn't you be busy with your own army?"

"It's not my fault my army is totally organic and the X-Parasite EATS organic life for breakfast!"

Nice to see the plot moving forward. Keep it up.

I NEVER expected to see this updated ever again.
Toby860 chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
why in all of sam hell did you make shinji kirby. you could've made in as any other hundreds of people you could you should've made him into samus or better yet prince marth from fire emblem cuz he's in the game 2 and he would make a much better character for shinji. but I guess since you've done so much with the story are ready and it's so long I guess there's not much my rent in can do now I just wish I picked a better starting character for shinji. I'm only on chapter 1 so I hope they managed to change bodies somewhere in this story line how you should make him someone like prince marth or samus or you could make him into star fox. I don't see how making shinji kirby is justice for anything in any universe. based on what shinji has done for others that's like a slap in the face. you also should probably bring a character from a different story over and make him into a female gas female changes are funny.
NightmareSyndrom chapter 28 . 10/2/2011
Um, one question. Didn't most if not all that stuff Medusa asked Pit about happen AFTER Pit had died? She would now more about some of that stuff then he does.
Alex Warlorn chapter 108 . 8/20/2011
Not wasting any word, she turned away from the bewildered Gendo and stepped in front of the rebel leaders.

Bewildered? Pst. For a man not used to such things, he'd be on his knees a broken man.

It might have been simpler if the Koopalings had done the typical Koopa tradition and lied, since all their alliances with the SSC are just smoke now.

"Well, what ELSE can I do? We've been en route for hours… and nothing happened. I need some ACTION!"

I think the readers concern. En rout is never fun. Ask my Dungeons and Dragons players.

"Well… sensors indicate that if it continues to fly on this path… it will impact planet Zoness in one hour."

I'd say something, but that's how drama works: coincidence. Though the way I read it, was under the impression the Asteroid was headed at them from the front of the ship, not behind.

I want that thing shut down before it reaches the planet, you got that?"

Heh. IDIOTS! Blowing up an asteroid just causes it to have a MUCH LARGER impact area when it hits! Then again I doubt they've dealt with many! But dang. Did they just play into the enemy's hands!

It also explains why the Asteroid was along THEIR rout out of the 129,600 possible angles they could have come to Zoness from.

SA-X and Rei-III aren't likely to MIND being blown up. SA-X would just spread the X parasites all over the impact area from the original meteor to giant swarm of little meteors, and Rei-III could say the same the Phazon and could just reform herself after the blast.

THis ironically flawlessly fit with how the heroes DO often play into the hands of the villains in the Kirby verse.
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